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for The Intertwined

by Sardave

schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story,I know its been awhile It was very good reading.I enjoyed it very much I hope to see more soon..
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was really great. i am really looking forward to the next part. so does this mean both girls are still half dressed? lol im sure the boys at camp would like that. hehe
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was SO glad to see an update today after a rather sucky month, cancer scare, & a needle happy tech who had to stick needle shy me 3 times before being able to draw blood, I still have a huge bruise in my inner elbow, she was so happy she hit the vein & gave me a hematoma even if she didn't get any blood, the needle got clogged. I'm glad to see that we're almost to where the fic started, with Sango getting quills removed from her hip. Really interested to see where this goes next. For some reason I keep seeing adult Shippou, Inuyasha & possibly Kurama kidnapping the girls when they return to Kagome's time permanantly, because they never got to kidnap the girls, like pretty much everyone else did back in the past, or at least Kagome since Naraku in the fic is the only 1 to kidnap Sango that I can remember.
person MeLaiya
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man it about time. Id almost lost hope. Its so hard to find good writing these days Ive gotta cling like a starving roach to day old meat when I do. Please keep up the good work and update soon.
person MeLaiya
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I am so loving this, I stayed up for fricken hours reading all the chapters posted. Please update soon and keep up the good work, love to see what comes of this
person VB
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why didn't you just have them all join them in a bath... it would have saved an argument.:P I'm so happy for the update. I can't wait to find out what you have planned.
person Diane
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yippee!! I was just about to go to bed when I decided to check for updates 1 more time & I'm sure glad I did since I've been missing this, especially since the last 1 ended on a cliffy. I really enjoyed this & am looking forward to seeing where this goes next.
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i was reading your recommendations on your profile page and i noticed you mentioned some 'labyrinth' stories. on 'adultfanfiction' in the 'labyrinth' category is a fic by gaeliceyes called 'return to the labyrinth' that is exceptional, i know because i'm one of her beta readers, give it a quick read if you have the time.

i like the interactions and your character portrayals. i love the fact she's not going to dump yasha (i hope she's not going to dump him!) i was wondering when somebody was going to put her with the two youkai with the fuzzy ears, she can have a field day with all the ear rubbing... and a tail! kagome's idea of heaven! in the scene when the girls were taken away i was touched by the concerted effort by both guys to see to her modesty, seems there's some feeling for her with youko or at the least she has his respect.

i'm really enjoying this story and it's one of my favorites especially since i have a thing for the white haired bishi and there are three of them here... three!! *doesn't know if she should drool or dance and twirl* (i also like the red haired bishi and there's even one of them in this >=D

i shall look for an exceptional reward incentive that includes chocolate for your next update... maybe something with alcohol (not for the kiddies).

a pleasure,
ginny


person Diane
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I've read this through twice already since the last update & I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next since you left it on kind of a cliffy. Hope you can update soon.
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see this updated! I really enjoy this, Hopefully the well will even work for Sango! What would she think of the future? Love it, hope its updated soon!