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for The Intertwined

by Sardave

schedule May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
When are yougoing to update? I reslly enjoy this story. Is kagome going to end up with Inuyasha or Youko? Or both? Is Sango going to end up with Seeshomaru or Miroku? Personally I prefer Sesshomaru. But as the author it is up to you to make the desicion. Please update soon. Please. I'l give you cookies. I'll give you all the updates you could want. Just please update soon. I really want to find out what happens next.
person LoveThisFic
schedule April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update this! I have been checking this story over and over forever now, waiting for an update. I would LOVE it if you did! I will be your new best friend!! I will never be able to get this off my mind till I can put an ending to it! Lol. Sorry for being psyco. Please update! :)
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i do believe that i had read the last chapter-- i believe i had reviewed elsewhere. i had been listing some of my favorite stories for someone and i thought if this one. i really miss it, but i do know that 'real life' can be a cruel mistress and there are times we aren't allowed or given respite to do the things we want. i also want to express my belated condolences for your loss. my own sister passed over a year ago after i had done my best to care for her (there are times i felt like i had failed her, but she is no longer in pain and for that i am grateful).

you are a gifted and talented individual-- i hope you all success and time to pursue all that makes you happy... and maybe that you will continue with your writing and art.

thank you,
ginny
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person YoukaiFate
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have spent the whole day reading this story (instead of Christmas shopping, LOL!) and am truly disappointed that there isn't more to devour. I am loving Youko and Sesshoumaru in this fic---not to mention how you have kept the others in character. I'm sorry you have gone through so much recently, but I am glad that you have taken some time out to update this awesome story. It's hard to keep in the writing mood when life intrudes with all of its myriad difficulties, but sometimes it helps as an escape, too. =)

Now for the begging. Please please please update? It would be a fabulous Christmas present. And you truly have a gift to share. =)

Look forward to more,
Fate
person Anon
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I decided to reread this & just got to chapter 9 & found a goof, it's in the last section where Sess & Youko bring the girls to the cave, the last sentence in the 2nd paragraph; Their bathing of Naraku and Gau would have to wait until their condition was a little more predictable. I think you should change the names from the villains to the girls if ever you go back & edit the older chapters, I did get a good laugh out of it though. I don't think anyone actually cares if the evil guys get a bath or not, much less them giving it to them. ^_^;
person sysclp
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating! I really like this story and I hope you are able to stick with it and update more frequently now. Keep up the good work!
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story please update soon. I wanted to know what are the pairs for this story?

person Tink
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, keep it up! i really like how things are going, and it definitely works... i am really liking the interaction between the groups! i cant wait for the next chapter! please update soon!
person Anon
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's been a long time since I've seen the fic. And I really missed it!! I love your writing I really do hope that you can keep updating, but I also know that life sometimes gets in the way. Be it good or bad.
person Anon
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry you've been having a sucky year but very glad you're back & posting again. I really enjoyed chapter 14 & am really looking forward to the next 1, hopefully soon.