rate_review Reviews

this story is really interesting to say the least. I really enjoyed reading it. Poor Kagome being betrayed by her friends. Also I hope that Kaede becomes her child that is the least she deserves for having Shippo taken from her in such a way.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

I really like this, when i read the summery I was like nope on to the next story, but I decided to take a look and I want to know when Sessho is going to meet "The Experiment". I want to know more please don't lose our Muse. write some more

i like it very much plaese update soon i would like to read more

I liked the first chapter, the second seems a bit beter crafted and I'm curios as to where this going!

Great Job

I'm so happy that you updated. Your story is exciting and beautiful. Please update soon again.

are you going to update? becuase this is a good story.

Love it so far! Please update soon.

I think that this is one of the few stories out there that has the potential to be truly great. Congratulations on this fabulous start and I hope that you keep this story as unique as can be. I think that I will be truly disappointed if this turns out to be what so many others write. Please try to make this as refreshing and new as you can. Good luck with this and I look forward to seeing where you take this. Your grammar and spelling are excellent and I like your writing style.
I do have one critique and that is simply that there are a few areas in your story that you switch from the first person point of view to the narrarators point of view and back again, although you are still speaking of Kagome's thoughts and feelings. Pick one or the other. It will make the story much easier to understand. Either keep it in her point of view or use the narrarator, but using both makes it a little confusing.
Seren1tystar01

I LOVE IT!!!!

Wow. That was amazing. I can't wait to find out what else happens. How does Sess and Kags meet? Please update soon.