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for From The Ashes

by KogasAngel

person Mistress of Darkness32
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, From The Ashes. It is so cool. I can't wait till you put up the next chapter, I mean come on you left all readers with a really good cliff hanger. What will the other's reaction to Kagome be like, and what will Kagome do now that they know she's alive. I just can't wait to see what you plan to happen lext. Hope to see your next chapter soon.
person Maru
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update very soon please!
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is a great story, I really hope that you continue to write on it. The cliffy was really evil by the way. Any how, hope you up date soon. And Keep up the great work.
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this story. Please update really soon!
person madebo2
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please keep writing. oh so good.
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I've been waiting so long to see when they would finally get together... well not togther but see eachother... well you know what I mean! Anyways, this makes me so happy! Please update soon as I don't know if I can take the suspence of what's going to happen to Kagome-chan.
person Anon
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Seloa
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEHEEEEE! mores I need mores....and s'mores but that's a different issue
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to seeing more of this story it's really cool hope to read more soon!!!
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not much of a fan of the k/h because she needs someone who is not emotionally constipated like inuyasha was... but i like the story and will suffer through the pairing.

should kagome have at least clapped her hands in a shinto prayer for the dead before poking through the woman's ashes. even inuyasha was completely torn up over killing the bandits while in his full youkai form, kags should have felt a little more remorse, i understand she is semi-possessed while she's asleep and becomming ooc as the phoenix gains more control but should it not be more gradual?

please excuse my complaining as i may think my opinion has worth i am often proved wrong by gifted authors who can weave a tale that convinces me of my mistaken view... a challenge.

good literature and interesting reading are most important and you are an author who has proved capable of producing both.

thank you,
ginny