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I stumbled upon this story and really enjoyed it. Sorry to see that it doesn't seem to be finished thought. Hoping you will complete it eventually!

wonderful story so far! please contact me when you update, I'd like to see how this one turns out.

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The story is enchanting so far. I'm curious
to see who Kagome pairs up with, if she pairs
up. I've noticed that you're not really a
Kagome and Inuyasha person. Lol. Well, I can't
blame yah. I hope to see how they resolve this
darker phoniex problem and being the sucker I am,
I'd love to see some romance.

this is a really great story, I hope that you update soon.

I'm so glad you updated! I love this story and can't wait to find out what happens next.

Whew! What a roller coaster ride of emotions! I'm not sure where to start, so I'll start with Kikyou and Kagome, since most of this centered around them. It was really, really hard to hear kagome say how much she hated Kikyou and for Kikyou to answer her back so calmly. I was really feeling bad because at first it made Kagome seem petty and like the bad guy trying to intrude on the true love between Inu and Kik. And then Kikyou leaves and we find out that she lied to Kagome, -- that she knew that Inuyasha was falling in love with HER and just hadn't been able to give him up. So, was the lie that hanyou and youkai only give their hearts once, -- they have only one love? If that was the lie, then Hiei could have told her. Or was the lie about WHO Inuyasha loved? Kik's thoughts were that Inu loves Kagome even now, but he sure doesn't show it at all. And then later, the phoenix lets Kik know that he knows her secret, -- that she had killed a child she had conceived with Inuyasha because she couldn't bear to have a child with youkai blood in its veins. *fans self* It seemed as if Kagome also knows, since she was crying inside. And she will never tell Inu.

Let me pause here for a moment of sheer, unadulterated BEGGING. Please, please, please let the phoenix tell Inu the truth!!! He deserves to know that everything he has done, -- every choice he has made, -- every time he hurt Kagome, -- it was all for a lie. He deserves to know the lengths that Kikyou went to in order to hold onto him, when she simply can NOT ever truly accept all of him. He deserves to know those things for himself, but he also deserves to know them so he can face how much HE wronged Kagome. He seems to be doing a good job of blaming HER right now. I was glad to see him feel ashamed that he had falunted his feelings for Kik in front of her, but that just isn't enough if those feelings were manipulated. Kik knew what she was doing to Kagome. And it is KILLING me that she is coming off looking so good when everyone is looking down their noses at Kagome. I mean, it was HARD to watch Kagome/the phoenix move towards Kikyou and Inuyasha get all riled up and threatening her. And then Kaede made her confess to hating Kik in front of everyone. And then crying, "I just want to be loved, -- is that so wrong?" (Sorry, -- old SNL flashback. LOL!!) It just made her look pathetic. And it was eating me alive. LOL!! I hate it when you do that!! And I love it when you do that. You really know how to wring out my emotions.

Kag's interaction with Hiei was interesting. And you really shocked me by having Yukina overhear that last part. That's an interesting development. Kagome is really making him think about himself and his life, isn't she? And he had read accounts that told how badly she was treated by Inu and yet she stood by him, always.

I'm going to put in a bid here for MORE Hiei/Kag next time, and more Miroku and Onigumo. Kaede and Genkai, too. Those are the characters I must have MORE of. ^_^ Fabulous chapter, as always.

P.S. I would love to volunteer to beta on this, but I am scared of time committments. LOL!! However, if and when you need someone, if you don't get a steady one, please feel free to email me and I'll try to help. themadmiko @ yahoo

Love your stories, can't wait for the next update.

This is a really cool story and I look forward to seeing where you take it, so if you would please email me the updates when you post them. Till then keep up the great work.

Michiru ^.~

My email is MichiruAOZ@yahoo.com

oooh I like this story
very creative, You just gotta keep going!
Update soon k?
KUDOS!
^_~