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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, not bad at all. I loved the lemon, and all the attention that Inuyasha gave to Kagome. Nice story.
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story was good but you upset my by miss spell inuyasha move it Iron Reaver soul stealer not reaper
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*whine* That was reaaaaaaly good-- I mean reaaaaaly good. This has been a fun story-- maybe in time we'll see a bit more?
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thats so romantic!! How about a tryst under the moonlight?
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
p.s. and maybe w/ some fireflies flying about?
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it ! i wish it was a full sex scene though!!!!! it was hot!!
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! She did forget! But the bell did ring..... Is it me or is Inu OOC? Or maybe he's still giddy from the 'previous event,' Is the wine a 'thank you' for his recent 'boney present?' Well there be more? Kagome could use more protein, she is a growing girl after all and I'm hoping Inu is also 'growing big & strong' too? Will Kagome have steak? she deserves a reward too! Well enough of my perverted questions! Update soon! Plz!!
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uhm... Inuyasha never knew his father, his father died saving the hime Izayoi [inu's mom] and he.
So, I don't get it.... but anywho aside from that, its been done before but in an enjoyable way. There are some spelling and grammar issues but nothing too bad that would turn readers off from reading.
I look forward to the next chapter... But I just thought you should know that.
So, I don't get it.... but anywho aside from that, its been done before but in an enjoyable way. There are some spelling and grammar issues but nothing too bad that would turn readers off from reading.
I look forward to the next chapter... But I just thought you should know that.
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Freaking awesome!! This is freaking hot wheww!
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad.....hmmm.....InuYasha must of been a very good puppy! Not just rewarded w/ pleasure, but also a bone! *wink*