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for Wait For Me

by ANGEL2006ASHLEY

schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha aww so sweet! I didnt see this first but now that I do--- i looove. Me lurve sesshy kags!
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww this was so cute i loved it
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW not only a talented writer but a taletnted song writer! Great job honey!
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like a really good story and i can't wait to read more.
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want to say that this is a great begining for a story, but! in the last sentance in the second chapter, 'thanx' is not spelled like that! it is speeled as ---> 'thanks' ok? its just a small grammer glich, but its still noticabele. Other than that, i saw nothing else wrong with it, and i hope you can continue soon, because this is definatly a great begining for a great story!
Up-date soon!!!
TTYL;
megan
person Kimmy
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, looks like its gonna be a sweet story! can't wait for the rest ^_^
person swtdrm01
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It definitely sounds like a winner and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
person Little Jack 2
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww that's so sweet,I can't wait to see what happens next.

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