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for Noodle Delights!

by AlysiaStorms

person Patricia_may
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I now love noodles!! I think I will have Oden (is that how you spell it) later. Update soon!!! Will you update on "A Ghostly Love" anytime soon?
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now I remember what put the idea of buying noodles in my head today. I started reading last night and you have a very tasty series going here. Keep up the noodly and lemony goodness.

Ja ne!!!
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sneaky lol
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sneaky lol
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think Im hooked on this-- kinda strange since I AM eating ramen at the moment hahahah. I love it-- is this all or is there another chapter?
person Lynn
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol you are mean with them! :D Gotta love that wicked fantasy of yours :D
person Youkai06
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 -- Great story, keep it going. Love the tease that Kag put on Inu.
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha OH that's fucking great.

lol
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL I like the end of the chapter. She is kinda wobbly after having an orgasm. But right when she is done and he moves from behind her the family comes in and sees him... So he was licking off her juices and the mother wants him to stay for dinner so why did he say Kagome already fed him when all he is doing is licking off her essence from his hand but hmmmm. That might be good to the hanyou
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good and naughty one shot. ;P