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for Moon Dark, Star Bright

by northstar

person nebulia
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So creepy, and so, so good. I love this, even if it is squicky. An almost refreshing take on the SessRin thing--yeah, it's kinda gross, but still, it's very different and amazingly written.
person demoneyeskyo
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it. it's beautiful, passionate and everything in between.

"Cruel fingers slide into the most vulnerable of passages and demon strength restrains the most fragile of creatures. Her cries are not of fear; but of passion. Her demands are not of release; but of hunger. And when he sets her above him and lowers her down; when he fills her up and she cries in pain; even then she begs for more. More of his touch. More of his kisses. More of his love."

beautiful, just beautiful. i don't know what else to say but that i absolutely love this paragraph!
person animegirl007
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your last two stories were "Great!!!!!!" keep them coming!!!
person GV
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's sick and twisted and everything i was told to hate but i love it cause YOU TOLD IT PERFECTLY
person monet
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story very much. very sweet in the medical treatment. the second chapter was most well hot... I could tell a story or two with me playing as little rin lol
person Ppalae1
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Liked them both except for Jaken from behind Rin but I can understand what Sesshomaru was trying to do. How old is Rin just asking but is she at least a teen or is she a little younger. Will she be making Sessohmaru feel better from now on with her mouth as well as you know below the waist. But all in all both stories are good keep up the good work and update soon.
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person Qiana
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please add another chapter
person Simon Cowell
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GOOD GOD MAN... GUH... UGH... just... UGH.
person e
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the second story better, both were good.