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for Moon Dark, Star Bright

by northstar

person animegirl007
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please keeep them coming...I so loving them!!!!!
person sorceress0209
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved these, they have a little bit of everything that we love to read, but when are you going to finish the other two stories that we have been waiting on please I can't wait anymore to finish reading them.
person adeaneri
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol. SEEmen taste yuky. your mean to Jaken. that was hilarious
person liliesformary aka HM
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5 is funny in a not-so-funny-kida-creepy way. Still, I enjoyed it. Chapter 6 is just creepy, but still very good. It makes you want to shudder.
person theMaven
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That last one was TWISTED, lol. Beautifully written with a wonderful flow, but totally twisted.
person Teela
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are my god. I think I'm gonna build a temple and worship you XD I love your stories so much. You are the queen of lemons and Sesshy's dark nature. You musn't stop writting it would certainly kill part of my soul ^_~
person Ru-Doragon
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay. The first one was just plain creepy. The second 2 were okay. I liked the 3ed on best. The ending is sweet.
person theMaven
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And his heart grew 10 sizes that day, lol. Well done. A+
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice and hot. i love the way you write them together.
person liliesformary aka Helena Markos
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Love this new chapter. The emotion in it made it feel much less squick than the others (not that I don't heart the squick). Well done and hoorah!