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for Moon Dark, Star Bright

by northstar

schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ya!!!!!Great chappies really!!!The dialogues are the most...entertaining, I felt like reading over and over and repeating to myself too...The Jaken involving is prettty creepy but ch-5 (sex-ed) is the best in humour!! Sess's character is perfectly outlined...he is toooo perfect even in molesting, and Rin is just as innocent and longing for love and attention as would a child!!The story is too good to read even though it involves so deep and dark pain in places...best of luck for other chappies !!^_^
person Ivy
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you write the most amazing oneshots!
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was fantastic! Damn, Sesshoumaru is HOT!
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The "sex ed" one was funny!
person Ivy
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love that you write oneshots of Rin/Sess! Chapter 7 is my favorite one so far and I'd think it would be awesome if you wrote a multichap fic on it. You are very talented with your descriptions, and you can almost envision what your writing about =) Can't wait for more!
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dame all of them are fucking great. everyone of them was hot. i will give it to you. that you do write the best sex. i will have to go dry off than come back to reread them again. by than my husband should be home. lol lol
person animegirl007
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice little piece!!!!
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love these little tidbits of dark dark goodness!

thank you!
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i have 2 ask how old is rin in this?
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read Lollipop agan (It's bee a while...and last time I stopped halfway in...but I soldiered through it this time. Ug, Jaken is squick!)...anyway, this line:

“Why can you put your whole arm in your mouth?”

“Rin practiced,” she said proudly. “My brothers all had to give me their desserts ‘cause Rin won the dare! My oldest brother Ichiro said Rin would make some lucky boy a good wife someday!”

Just LOL goodness. Yea you will, Rin!