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You really do write some pretty hot and spicy smut. How old are you? Yeah, a dumb question, ne? You young ones are so advanced in sexual knowledge these days that it totally floors me. I thought I'd die when Kagome started to just blurt out that she and Sesshoumaru...but smart girl, she didn't let her anger get her to fall into a trap of confessing. She blantly lied and did an obvious good enough job to fool the both of them. Rock on!!! I don't usually like stories that throw them into sex so soon without an actual story, but this just satisfied my hentai nature so well. I am well known for my love of good hentai fics. You did a good job with making it hot, fast, steamy and truly believable. I've been reading a few of your other fics and I've noticed you have quite alot of talent. Keep up the good work and I'll definately be looking forward to more. You also write on A Single Spark too right? I read on so many sites that it gets confusing sometimes. I really should learn to keep track of these things. Ta!!! JEN

I think that you are a genious! I have always wanted to, when i was younger and still going to school, to have sex in all of my class rooms...but sadly, my bf -who is now my husband- always said no, they would be able to see the evidance of such a pleasurable act. Ha! Yeah, right!
Any ways, i luv how you continued this story, and cant' wait to see if they have any more sex in a classroom, or bathroom....maybe the next day, they could have sex in the girls locker room!? Like, right after the Archery practice thing? and perhaps in the girls Bathroom, and Boys bathroom? and the English room, Sciance room, and Math room....maybe even the cafiteria....
You could have Kags fall in luv with sesshy, and then feel betrayed when she Hears -doesn't Know its a false rumor- that Kagura and him had sex the other day, that would be a perfect exaple of a highschool drama, my friend went through that in our Junior year, she still has problems with her husband over it -yes they got married!
I hope you make a new chapter soon! I really like this story -that was suppose to be a one shot-but, i luv how you've made it into a really hot story!!!
TTYL;
megan

*drool* I want shessy so badly

OO OO I wanna see the roleplaying!!!!

wow that was awsome i love it ... later for now

angel

OMFG more dear god more that was hot.....wow update more Ja Na

Woo hoo! Very steamy! Loved the way all the guys were after her. And she was so oblivious to it. I was wondering how in the world she was going to end up in the shower with Sesshoumaru. And it was TOO funny that SHE bit HIM! Hmmm. Wonder if she ever got that paper signed?

You better write some more or I'll find a way to smack you for realz. lol jk. I'm just saying you need to write more this is so damn good. Hot too!

I like the roleplaying part now that is really fun to do hmmm....... If I was Kagome I would do him and have it video taped and if Inuyasha would piss me off I would show it to him and say You could never make me feel this way like Sesshoumaru could. :D

aiiiiiiiiiiiii.

u are truly heaven sent.

i loved it. as much as i loved the first.

u just seriously made my day. would u like to make my whole year and write a whole story of this? jesus. that would be incredible.