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~waves~ Hi hi Hun,
Just checking up on you. I hope all is well. I just wanted to say that I've really enjoyed your writing talents. I hope that your not going to stop writing or anything. Please continue this plot when ever you have a chance but please don't let it fall away. ^^;

Take cares and keep up the wonderful job!

I hope you didn't forget about this story, it's really good and I've been waiting for an update. Please don't let it go unfinished.

Thanks for the update. Still waiting for them to get together. LOL. Keep up the great work!

hmm.
Well I liked how you explained that even the receptionist knew that Kagome was upset. But the "coward scene" as I call it in my head seemed, well I don't know how to explain it. It's good but at the same time there are flaws. Kagome slammed open a door and a few seconds later proceded to slam it -presumably for the first time- again this time closed. I liked it (especially where Inuyasha noted to himself the it wasn't an easy task but it would be done anyways and that Kagome need not know) but it feels like there is something that I found in all the other chapters that is missing here in this scene.

I really liked the Lunch part of this chapter. When viewed by itself it doesn't seem like an "aha! now everyone understands Hojo is bad" moment it was just Dr's discussing a patient and coming to a realization that there may be a problem that needs attention.

I wasn't completely keen on the latter part of this chapter. It shows Kagome's motivation and reasoning when it comes to her future and passion (for food). But, as in the beggining of the chapter it seems to lack the special je ne sais quoi that is present everywhere else in the story.

For all that, I did like the chapter as a whole and I liked the ending where Kagome won't speak of something so that she won't ruin supper.

Good idea to have Miroku as an obgyn. Mostly a gyn. I'll bet he loves his job and is up at 5 a.m. every day with a song in his heart. He lives for breast exams. He would probably have a DVD instruction set showing how exactly to give a breast exam, doing small medium and large breasts. He has to work hard not to smile too largely. He consistently lobbies Sango to let him do her breast exams for her. lol. Funny how much you can know about a character from watching 175 episodes. Thx a bunch for updating!! LOVE your story!!! :))))

I'm anxiously awaiting the wonderful affair

Yay! Good chapter with the confrontation that proves the ongoing attraction. Some Hojo bashing, but not too much. And now we have Mama involved. Gotta love Mama. Hope she tells it like it is in the next chapter.

I am awaiting your next chapter, trying to be non-obsessive about it ... IT'S NOT WORKING ... ^_^ ... I hope you're writing chappie 11 as I'm reviewing. But seriously, I like your writing. It's a real treat to find a well-written story out here on AFF. I like your idea and your A/U character portrayals. In canon, I don't think Inuyasha would ever be patient enough to be a doctor, but you do a good job of taming him down a little for this role. I'm looking forward to seeing him and Kagome get into some jungle f***ing in the near future ... and I agree with your portrayal of Hojo. Some people can't handle real sex. I've observed this in R/L, especially in one of my friends who decided to chuck the whole thing and become a conservative bible-thumping Christian. Doing so allowed her to quit on the whole dating scene, quoting the bible while doing so. I think Hojo could go this way, too. Just a thought.

Hmm, I really like this story very much! Its great. I love the detail you put into, the bio stuff, and the fact that I understand that bio stuff cause I took Anatomy and physiology. Which makes me happy :). Anyways, I really hope Kagome has a talk with Hojo about their sex life...or whatever it is. It can't even be called a sex life because what they did can't be considered sex or making love. When you make love to someone you want to make them feel good, not plunge right in with no foreplay or anything! That is so wrong and I can't believe when she tried to show him something that sexually interested her, he threw up. Man, what a...I don't even know what to call him but its bad! The closest thing to what they did reminds me of someone being willingly raped. I don't think she is in love with either or lust, like some suggested. I think that since Hojo is the man her grandfather approved of and blessed them to be married, she may think she is in love with him to honor that. Its strange because he shows emotions toward her, but at the same time lacks emotion towards her. Anyways, my rant is done. I really do love this story and check daily to see if you've updated. I can't wait to see what is in the note! And I too got some 'not quite right' vibes from the interaction between Hojo and Kikyou, kinda seemed silly for his boss to come way out there to call him in to work. Speaking of work, grats on the job. I wish you success!

Thanks for the update.. You just keep me hanging. I know that these two are going to get together but it is like ARRGH... LOL. Now a small cliffhanger.

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