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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes she had 16 personalities. I'm reading the book now but i made the mistake of watching the movie first. anyway great chapter.
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is very well written, I especially love the little things with Sesshomaru's flashbacks. They really add weight to this story. Great job!
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I have to admit to being overcome with emotions at this! Its so good-- so powerful to see the almight sessy in this position..
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Things are pretty good with me, how about you? Im sure this one was hard to write its very psychological, but you have a way of getting things to flow very smoothly.(thsts why i always feel like the chapter went by so fast *crys*) I know it will turn out great, your one mean writin' machine!
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yet a nother great story so far. this one kind of makes me think of the story Sybil. have you ever heard of it
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the dreams thay seem so.....i dunno dream like? ^_^! Its hard to explane i just like the way ya write them, there like realistic...in a dream way. lol
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love that InuYasha is sticking with Sesshomaru, and that he's resorted to finding other methods of waking his brother. And the descrition of his eyes was so painful and well done. I'd like to see where this is going to go.
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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far you're doing avery good job with this story. I love that Sesshomaru mistook InuYasha for their father with his hair back, and how his younger brother inadvertently brought back memories, and hiccups. I know that wasn't supposed to be funny, but there was this image of Sesshomaru with hiccups that made me snicker, just a bit.
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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is going great so far! I wish I could write half as good as this. Keep it up.
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far, very well done. I can't wait to read more. I love that Sesshomaru cannot remember his reasons for wanting to shred the humans apart, as well as the denial on InuYasha's part that Sesshomaru is capable of such animalistic brutality.