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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He is most deffently not ready do deal with this on his own, Inuyasha best be gettin' his ass back there quick!! I love how things are progressing, how Sesshomaru is confused about his feelings twords his father and what he did with him. It's very realistic, it's not like he's magically better or ok with everything cause he's a demon.
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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are so good at this. I know people who have been through this. ths story is good. keep it up. send me an email when you up date. use the story name as the subject.
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yet another perfect chapter!
Its good to see Sesshy sorta dealing with it-- kinda anyways.
I am so excited to see some more!
Its good to see Sesshy sorta dealing with it-- kinda anyways.
I am so excited to see some more!
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I cant wait until you complete it.
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO! There apart! But they will be together again soon right?????...............please?
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love all of the little details in this, subtle things he realized he'd been doing because of bad memories, from the obi to the bedroom to the trekking. Very nice. And I feel bad for him, thinking he can't rely on InuYasha, and want to smack InuYasha for going away. (though I still love him, anyway.)
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I liked that Sesshomaru was interested to know InuYasha's motives, and that InuYasha passed the test. You're taking things at a nice, steady pace, without rushing them. I also like that you have both of them in a bit of turmoil, Sesshomaru over InuYasha's kindness, InuYasha over social mores and his feelings for his own brother.
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and the Karo, sure, as the writer you get leway (sp?). I mean, if people can make the characters college students or movie stars, I think we can have Karo syrup in the feudal era.
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know i get excited every time they get a little closer, its like 'its happening its happening!!' lol. I really like the way Sess tested Inu, i know i would be thinking similar things if i was in his position.
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Did you post this story on mediaminer some time ago? I think I have seen this story on there. This is good! Keep it up.