rate_review Reviews

SAD but beautiful ending and story...
I loved it.

this story was so good, I want to cry! really I do. It's ending was so amazing even though it was kinda sad but you made me understand the reason for it. That's what makes a good author....to be able to make every story and every angle believable and understandable and you have done that. When the wolf demon was first introduced I new exactly where you were going to take this story and I didn't like it. But after having read the ending I felt it was a good ending and a smart decision for Sesshomaru to make. Him and his brother would never be able to have a normal life because of so many different factors and their relationship would fall apart because of those factors. I also had such a hard time reading some of the child abuse stuff. How things like that can actually happen is so beyond what I can comprehend. I can't understand how anyone would want to do that to a child. It must have been hard for you to write but you did it and you described it well. You caused me to have an emotional response to it and that is what a writer wants. Again great job.

How...how could you end it like that? You have to put warning for sad ending you know.

well i really liked this story so thank you for writing it, but i have a little problem with the ending. well i will not be rude so i will introduce myself, im Katsushika Matsuyama and im an experienced inuyasha fanfiction reader and collecor, so you can believe me if i say your story is good, but you have messed up the ending with that wolf. the story too had a litle deja-vu feeling and i can tell i have read something similar in Ankh Ascendant's 'In A Blue Moon'. but with the ending i still had a problem, you had ended it so guickly with that wolf thing that it killed the whole story. it seems like you had a good idea but not a great ending. it just sucks. will you let me say an advice? when you wish to finish a story dont change the situation so dramatically, i mean you can make changes but not in so plain manner, and with such ridiculous idea. please dont hate me, i just wanted to give an advice. it is up to you if you accept it or not hate me for it or not.
i wish you great happiness in writing more fanfiction.

by: Katsu

I liked it up until the end. It was pretty odvious you were going to end it that way when you brought that wolf demon in but I was hoping that I was wrong. Sadly I was not so it left me disappointed. It really doesn't have to do with them seperating but the lame way that they did. In earlier chapters the writing was well writen so I'm hoping that other things you write will be ended better.

...Intense

Wonderfully written and mindbendingly intense.

I just wanted to say how much I loved and enjoyed your story. I rarely read outside the fandom I am involved in, but I came across your story and I must say, it was Excellent. Thank you for shareing it!

~DarkDreamer

This is really good.

It isn't just about sex, but has its own storyline to it.

You're really making me curious about Shorai. I read some other reviews and kind of wonder as they have if Sesshomaru will choose her ultimately instead of InuYasha. There seems to be affection there, but so much doubt between the brothers, as well as a reluctance in admitting their relationship to others that it almost seems like it isn't really meant to be. But, maybe I'm wrong. Anyway, nice chapter.

Very nice ending. You didn't just throw them together because it's what all the squeeing fangirls would want. You made it realistic, letting the two brothers be that... brothers. No strange or strained relationships, no lying to friends. And I also love that he didn't decide to mate Shorai immediately, either. He's looking at her as an option, one that wouldn't have been available if InuYasha hadn't come into his life the way that he did. You have tackled a difficult subject well, and gone about the story in a way that others don't.
Can't wait to read your next story.