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for A Fool's Redemption

by Grumblebear

person lilelf
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cant wait until you update. i love this story!!!!
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story. I am going to
add this to my favorites. Everything is well
written. The story flows, the characters are
well developed and EVERYTHING is interesting.
You've set up a new, unique world that no IY
writer has touched. I can't wait to read your
next chapter!
person nmos
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
greattt update!
I can't wait for the next one!
person special
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really great. I'm glad you've written this chapter... I'm so wrapped up in this story.
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ARRRRGGGGHHHH!!!! What is he gonna do??? Will Inu save her? As usual, it's another great chapter. I wouldn't have minded if you'd written a huge long chapter, it would help me make it through to the next chapter :( I am well and truly hooked on this.
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No matter where your poor brain is at, this story just keeps getting better and better. And yes, I would love to be on the update list. Though I will probably still keep checking AFF to see if there's a new chapter. I'm so pathetically hooked.

rowdyjaner@yahoo.com

person Ryo
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello there!

I must be honest with you and say that I've been reading this story since (I think) it had only 4 chapters lol. I'm not the type of person that reviews very easily because I never know what to say besides "I Love this story so much please update! if u don't -you may add here the "reader's threat" you are most fond of lol-". Then again, I think since I've been following your updates for so long I should at least let you know how much I love your story -lol- and that I want you to keep updating! -lolx2-

I basically just love how you write and describe the scenery and character's attitudes and impressions. Its so....GOOD!, I always get into it and feel as if I'm actually beside Kagome and/or InuYasha, just wishing I could punch either of the two so they could kiss already (OMG! But they did in chapter 13!! -laughs like crazy-)

I also hope that you are feeling better. From what I've read in your updates, I've noticed that you are fond of organization and perfection, and I have the feeling that not being able to concentrate because of the medications and all must be horrible for you. Please take care of yourself first and then worry about the updates, I won't mind if you take your time, as long as you DO update (sometime in the near future) then that will make me more than happy

:D Well then, sorry for bad English, as it is not my first language, but I really hope I got my thoughts and feelings across well enough for you to understand how much I truly love your story (L) <3

Good Luck! >3! Atte: Ryo Hikura :3
person fire4ashz
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
amazing! that gave me goosebumps! i love the detail in your fic! it really sweeps you off your feet and leaves you breatheless. have you considered possibly writing love novels! delicious!
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im awed by the imagination and dedication that is poured in to this story. I am literally on the edge of my seat with anticipation for the next chapter! "A Fool's Redemption" is altogether an exciting emotional roller coaster, and a delicious taste of personality. Keep up the good work :)

oh btw... Inuyasha is totally adorable when he isnt being a complete prat. hehe ;)
person lili
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am thoroughly impressed. I didn't expect such good writing to turn up in here, but I'm happy to say you proved me wrong. Hope you update soon, and get to some of the more steamy scenes!