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for A Fool's Redemption

by Grumblebear

schedule August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*does happy dance* ^_^ *dreamy sigh* i love fluff...
person cukid9
schedule July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure I've said this before, but I feel it bares repeating: No matter how long it takes for you to update this story, I will always come back to it. I think it's only one of two Inu stories left around here (or anywhere, really) that I read. It's wonderful to see how it's grown over the years--and, for that matter, how your writing has developed! This story is still as wonderful and refreshingly original as it was when I first found it. So I, for one, will never be upset if it takes you a year to update--just as long as you DO update :)

Oh, this chapter...with its secrets and the beginnings of angst...*sigh* I love angst, I really do, but it always breaks my heart in Inu stories because I just want them to be happy and together! Lol. That being said, I hope Naraku gets his, grrr, and Inuyasha won't be TOO mad at Kagome when she finally gets around to telling him what happened (I hate it when he's all mad and I-don't-want-anything-to-do-with-you! towards her...). I went back and read the chapter before this and realized I simply adore the way you write Playful Inuyasha. Wish there had been a little more of that before this angsty stuff...well, maybe, not really...

I also wanted to say thanks; I'd read through your book recs and decided to pick up the Dream Eaters books. 'Effing amazing! And you're so right--Chang is a badass, sexy man. I had to stop myself from skipping to the sections with him in them because I loved his character so much :)

I'm so glad you're still working on this story! I look forward to the next marvelous update!!

~cu-kid
person EveSuzuki
schedule July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! You just made my whole week! haha.. I loved it and can't wait for more of that night to come back to her.. I am soo in love with this story, I have your livejournal and your profile on here bookmarked on my computer (and check it often xD) just to make sure there isn't anything new that has come out.. haha... seriously I just about went through my ceiling when I saw a new chapter. THANK YOU SO MUCH! Keep Writing!
person weyrdkat
schedule July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Grumble -- don't worry about length -- we can wait for the good stuff. I may not want to, but I'll do it. Your story is just that good. It took me a minute to reaquaint myself with the last chapter, but after that it was like hugging an old friend. Exciting, and you didn't realize how much you'd missed them. Keep up the great work. I can('t) wait to read more! :P
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I can't believe I haven't come across this story before! I hope you get your updates out quickly, but I totally understand the whole perfectionistic OCD that comes over you when writing. I've got a oneshot being beta'd that took me like 6 months to be happy with, lol.
Now that I've read all your chappies, I'm very eager for more. It's super interesting and got me hooked from the first few paragraphs! Very cool plot; haven't read anything like it before. I like your writing style!
I can't help but feel suspicious of Naraku, though. I still can't tell whether he's good or not, even after your 15 chaps. He's always the bad guy, I can't help it lol.
I love how you've brought along Inyasha and Kagome's characters and relationship. I really like how they're opening up to each other; Inu's being so cute! I hope the lemony lime is coming soon, cause it sounds like it'll be great.
Hope this helps your writers ego and gets your muses pumping to get more out faster, lol. Take care!
*~*Evility*~*
person neca
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!.i loved the chapter as well as the whole story so far. thanks for finally updating. i had given up hope that you would continue this story. hopefully you'll update soon. keep up the awesome work.
person Swiffa
schedule June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First, let me congratulate you on a story well told. I found your story last night and am a little bleary eyed this morning. I almost never write reviews, but I wanted to thank you for putting the time into making a truly interesting and well written plot line with interesting characters. I am anxious to find out what happens next, and I like the way you've been revealing the characters and their back stories a bit at a time. Though, I do think the way the last chapter ended was a little cruel. "Red Eyes!" And Inuyasha's away And we still don't know what happen with Sango! I have my theories but I won't say them here. Please update soon.
~Ally
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever going to write another chapter to this story?
person nmos
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:(
this is such a good story. you should definitely update it when you have time.
person Rocky
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!

I think you are KILLING ME!!!!
I can't take this for much longer!!!
I need to know what happens, like today.
You left us with this cliffy, and I've been on edge ever since.
I check your story almost every day to see if you've updated, please tell me its still going!?!
I need this story like a fat kid needs cake..... and thats a lot.
Let me know if I can help out in anyway!!!!
Thanks,
Rocky