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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yash is a playa! it's interesting that he can be so trusting and allow the groping attentions of those women after being subjected to whatever was involved in being a research lab animal... it must have taken a good while to get used to it.
sango must be wondering what type of relationship he and kagome had in the past... his condition in the pic any indication.
good job!
thank you,
ginny
sango must be wondering what type of relationship he and kagome had in the past... his condition in the pic any indication.
good job!
thank you,
ginny
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Im impressed-- and I love! I hope to see an update soon, this is so well written and so very well thought out! Im in awe!
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful, so well written and the plotline is intriguing. Your descriptions are fluid and invoke very strong imagery. It has a very nice sci-fi-ish feeling to me, I can't wait to read more. Infact... UPDATE please!!! *snickers softly* Will any other cannon characters be making an appearance? I do hope so and I'll be interested to see how they fit into this new world. Please keep up the excellent work, I'll definately be checking back for this fic and looking into your other works. I love your style of writing, very eloquent.
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Intense. Very descriptive. Good work. I'm hooked.
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great second chapter. It is a lot of exposition, but it's done wonderfully. I'm looking forward to more.
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, yash might just rip her throat out without giving her a second thought, let alone a chance to explain herself. risking her life to shut down the facility and stop those responsible only to lose it at the hands of the one she was instrumental in saving...
still descriptive, the background story had to be told and it was quite interesting.
thank you,
ginny
still descriptive, the background story had to be told and it was quite interesting.
thank you,
ginny
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woo hoo. I liked the chapter just fine. Nice to know what's going on and such. I can hardly wait to see what happens when they meet! And if the lecher is here for sango, and so on and so forth...
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start. I'm really interested in seeing what happenes next. The plot seems interesting and unique so far. Is this world post-apacolyptic or just war torn? Was that Inuyasha covered in blood? Why is Kagome in hiding and who is her uncle? Is she safe in this city? I get the sense there's something darker going on in the city, for some reason.
I hope I get to see an update from you soon!
I hope I get to see an update from you soon!
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You've definitely got me intreagued with your storyline so far. Please do continue on with this story and do update soon!
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Pretty good start for being your first. Welcome to Aff and hope to see another chapter soon.
Chanda
Chanda