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nicely thought out world, nice set up, and yes...-please post the angst soon. please

hay, great story so far. i can't wait 'til the next chapter. please write more soon. :D

I enjoyed your story very much. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter. Update soon.

I really enjoyed your story so far. I can not wait until you update again.

wow. Great story so far. I hope that the next chapter will be be posted soon. I can't wait to see what kind of surprises that Sango's got up her sleve.

wow, i can only think of two or three movies that were based on a sort of 'dome technology' pauly shore's 'bio dome' and 'logan's run'. your's is much more discriptive and magnificant than either of those.

i was so happy to finally see a chapter four, i had been waiting and wondering when you were going to update, and you say you have chapter five?!?! soon?
*does a little happy dance*

a pleasure,
ginny

Enjoying the AU you're working to develop. Pity that utopias can't exist in real life, isn't it? I hope you're pointing to a Sango/Miroku mystery with her coment about someone leaving. So... onto chap 5?

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! You don't know how much I have waited for the next chapter to come up! Every day I checked and every day that it wasn't there I teared up a bit. For the past few days I forced myself not to look (watched water doesn't boil you know!). When I saw that it was up I nearly peed my pants! I didn't... But I did do my happy 'yay-there's-another-chapter-up' dance!

Yay with the detail! I heart it! And all the information one must take in... I was right there with Kagome! Overwhelming! I read it several times just to make sure I didn't confuse anything. That's good though. It forces me to concentrate entirely on the story instead of reading it and watching tv (among several other things) at the same time like I'm known to do. (Heh heh... must stop that habit...) I was wondering about the old peoples too. I would have felt horrible if there wasn't a place for them. You thought of everything haven't you? Down to the last detail! I heart detail. I thought I was there for a moment by the waterfall (preeeetty! I'd be there the entire day!).

You are an example to all with your lovely writing and I will again impatiently wait for the next chapter (YAY! Meeting!) I hope it's up soon or I'll cry! (I don't think that'll convince you... but it's worth a try eh?)

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P.S. I'm glad you find me humorous! I'm probably the least funny person in my family so that's interesting to hear. And the same thing happened to me too. Except my friend it was my friend doing something stupid on the computer next to me(I don't even remember what) that made me laugh. I was chuckling so much through the entire class that my teacher had to send me out. *Sigh* I got a detention that day... but I don't think it was for that... hmm.

so glad it's continuing. looking forward to more. like how kag. and sango interact

I guess it would be kind of creepy to say 'I love you' BUT I DO! You are awesome and I heart you! I went to read the next chapter but it wasn't there! I had a temper tantrum! I am very eager to see how Inu-Yasha and Kagome meet next, it's bound to be rough and tense. XD.

I don't think that I have read another fanfiction like yours. Your work is very original. (Then again I am an avid KagomeXSesshou-Maru (Don't kill me!) so this really is a breath of fresh air for me (too much of the Icicle Prince lately)) Your writing flows very nicely, so it's easier to read than a lot of fanfiction that I have read which makes me quite happy! Hats off to you!

I eagerly await your next chapter and hope that it isn't too long in coming.

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