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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the chapter. Will Naraku be an issue between Kagome and Inuyasha?? I can not wait until the next one.
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story and I can't wait until it is finished! Keep up the good work! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was great. It explained so much and I know there is still so much to learn. The story is coming along amazingly and I am enjoying every minute of it. Thank you for writing it..oh and I especially enjoy the long chapter. Sometimes when they are short, by the time you are into it, its over. Thanks again, til next time, take care! Ja ne!
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how you've set up such a surreal sort of world!
I can't wait to see how things with Inu and Kagome work out in
such a different reality then what I'm used to reading.
Just one question,
Is Miroku going to pop up in here somewhere??
I can't wait to see how things with Inu and Kagome work out in
such a different reality then what I'm used to reading.
Just one question,
Is Miroku going to pop up in here somewhere??
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story please update soon
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice scene and I love the idea of the dance hall. Ball's in Inuyasha's court, sort of.
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! Okay I am in love with this story now. Poor Kagome, what a terrible way to meet up with Inuyasha all of a sudden like that. But now the ice is broke, so to speak, what shall he do? I hope their next meeting is much better, and maybe a little longer, yes?
Update soon!! I'm coming back to check this one often!
Update soon!! I'm coming back to check this one often!
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awsome chapter. Keep up the great work!
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, with the descriptions!
yeah, to only know that person in such a painful setting and then find he's holding her... could have been worse, it could have been a very violent reaction. the natural animal instinct is fight or flight... recognition > shock > flight
a cliff
i am left
somewhat
unfulfilled.
and wanting more.
thank you,
ginny
yeah, to only know that person in such a painful setting and then find he's holding her... could have been worse, it could have been a very violent reaction. the natural animal instinct is fight or flight... recognition > shock > flight
a cliff
i am left
somewhat
unfulfilled.
and wanting more.
thank you,
ginny
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this. Just from the first chap alone, I'm liking this. Its very well written, gives enough of a hint of suspense to keep ya at the edge there, lol. Grammar/punctuation is on the money, and over all, a very enjoyable read. Now, on to the next chap. ;)