rate_review Reviews

I've just started reading your story and I must say I've now become so completely and utterly fascinated by your writing style. The AU world in which your story takes place is indeed a very interesting world. And I'm very much in love with the city you've built in your story. I actually would like very much to vacation there maybe one day. :D

I am though a tiny bit sadden that 'the kid' Inuyasha has been refering to wasn't Shippou. I think he would have made a very good nanny for him. He just seems like the only prefect candidate who could possibly put up with Inuyasha long enough to stay sane. Oh well, your story.

I'm also a bit curious, but is Inuyasha truly the only who escaped from that place alive? I mean, you've mentioned that he was, but surely there must have been at least one more who managed to escape right? Finally, I'm starting to feel a bit sorry for Kagome after reading chapter 7. If Inuyasha's currennt nanny was that eager to leave then surely life with Inuyasha won't be pleasant at all, not one little bit. I'm very much eager for chapter 8, can't wait for your next update.

I find myself looking to see if you have updated A Fool's Redemption everday because I love this story soooooo much!! Your descriptions of the scenes captivate me and I love how you have kept the characters unique to the personalities found in Inu Yasha but have also made them your own. I look forward to reading the next chapter and the ones that follow it! ^^

wow. this is realy good I just have two Q's. what happened to her parints/family? why didn,t she come to the city earlier? well thats it and I just want to say that i think you are a really great writer. I like the way you put so much detail and beauty into what you write it remindes me of the book "of Mice and Men" crapy book but, great details (not that your story,s crapy).Thats all I wanted to say ceep up the great work!!!

IT'S AMAZING!!!!!!!! BUT YOU NEED TO UPDATE!!

love it

I've been itching for a really good InuKag story cause it seems i've run out, and then i stumble upon yours. This has an amazing plot and a story that I've been looking for. I know the whole story is going to be a good read! I like it so much this far! Hope you update soon. =]

I've always managed to pass by your story while surfing the net. My only regret is that I did not read this sooner. Descriptive scenery and romance are a couple of my weaknesses in the fanfiction world both of which are well developed in A Fool's Redemption. The plot is moving along quite nicely and hope that another chapter will appear in the near future.

Write more please! Thsi is getting intresting, I will check up on your story often to see when you update it. Please update it soon I am very intrestead to see what the next chapter will lead too.

sometimes to effectively bring down an operation such as the research facility in your story, for the persons involved and working undercover to collect enough evedence and proof to satisfy the courts takes a whole lot of time. the persons working undercover at the risk of their own lives have to sometimes 'sleep with the devil' so to speak, to do terrible things to keep suspicion off themselves.

i can't see yasha just listening to her right away... and what's so wrong with feeling guilty for the bad stuff she had to do to bring those responsible for such evil to justice? she did have to inflict such pain to him and the other subjects, something completely against her nature.

i suppose naraku is a bad guy here too?

the imagry, scenery, characters, emotion... like a master craftswoman, weaving threads of many colors, artfully creating a beautiful tapestry each chapter giving shape and form.

a rich and sinful reward for such a beautifully colored and richly textured piece and encouragement to continue:

::ginny's rum balls::

~grind up: walnuts, dates, almonds, raisins, pecans, coconut, chocolate chips(lots and lots)...add more sticky dates and raisins if not gooey enough
~mix in: tons of mini-chocolate chips, 151 proof rum
~roll in ground nuts, cocoa powder, or finely ground coffee(hazelnut coffee is good)

because you don't cook them the alcohol is still there... warning: eating too many rum balls will make you drunk >=P

always a pleasure!
ginny

I'm loving the story, I kind of feel bad for Kagome though, Keep up the good work, can't wait until the next chapter.