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Uh-Oh...I have a bad feeling 'bout Kag's Work...Oh!!! Please, Please! Pretty Please! Update!!! If u have it already done please download Ch. 8!! I wanna know what happens next!!! *extremely curious* This story is awsome *-* Please keep writing as good as u have done 'til now!!! *Sorry 4 bad English LOL*

Great new chapter can't wait for the next!!!!!

i can see kagome taking some of his crap but i can also see her with a temper... she may be his personal lackey but canon kagome has a mouth, a temper and some attitude under the sweet-as-pie / girl-next-door facade... one would have to be made of some really strong stuff to work undercover doing what she had to do. i hope you show some of it.

hope you didn't get too drunk. glad you enjoyed them!

a pleasure,
ginny

Hey there, I haven't reviewed before but I've been with this story since the first chap. I like this story so I was waiting to see where it was going. I also wanted to check the consistancy of the author, hehe, cuz you know, some authors start great stories but never finish them -_- not to say im expecting updates every week or anything! lol, anyway! I loved chap 7, I was laughing almost the entire time! I barely know Emory but I love him already! I'm glad Inuyasha has a stress reliever, espeically with his temper. -“No!” came a shout from the darkness. “No drink! She’s not a welcome guest. Don’t be nice to her!”- That was especially my favorite part, lol. can't wait for next chap! Happy Writting ^_^

Not entirely satisfied with their first real meeting. It's unclear why she wouldn't smack him down for being so petulant. There's plenty of time for that, I guess, but it looks like she has a lot of reasons to accept his anger but challenge him on his behavior. There's no real reason for her to accept the position. Perhaps it would've helped to see some of that exchange through his eyes or to hear her voice some reason beyond not wanting to degrade herself vs the status quo. Anyway, it sets up an interesting scenario and I trust your writing to pull it off.

This was good but it makes me wonder how deep Kagome got herself into. Will the evil follow her to her uncles place? What will she tell Sango? What things will InuYasha make her do? He wants to humiliate her I can see that but how far will he go? Will he go too far and hurt her? Will he regret hurting her? What will her uncle say?
Great story so far! Please write more ASAP.

Oo what a meeting that one was! Poor Kagome. i was wondering why the boy was suddenly so eager to hand the job over to her too. I'll bet Inuyasha is gonna be just downright mean to get back at her. I hope she doesn't break from his treatment. Wait'll Sango hears about it too. Man oh man.
Okay update soon, please please please?

Great hapter can not wait until the next one comes out. When will Inuyasha break down and show his feelings to Kagome. Update really soon

Great chapter can not wait until the next one comes out. When will Inuyasha break down and show his feelings to Kagome. Update really soon.

wish I had more time to review, but at least I can say I enjoyed it and am looking forward to the rest quite a bit.