rate_review Reviews

Oh my god... I love this story. I've been reading it all day and it just took me away. At first I was a little weary, but now I'm defentily hooked on it. Your a great writer. Dont you dare stop writing.

don't worry about the readers who are in it for the quick thrill. give me a good story every time! something that captures my imagination and involves me on all levels. something that makes me ask: "where is the author taking this? How will it move forward? WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!"

i thoroughly enjoying this tale you're weaving and i encourage you to go at your own pace, otherwise how will you create the magic?

I absolutely adore this story! You write such longer chapters than some authors, and believe me, it is much appreciated.
In reguards to the plot, pertaining to Naraku and this "white prince", I have a sneaking suspicion that it is Miroku? Am I right! x]
One thing about the setting though, it's so amazingly detailed that i'd had a bit of a hard time imagining it all. So I attempted to make a sketch (or many sketches) but all seemed rather, lacking [stares at many crumpled paper balls near trash].
Keep it up!

Youg know, it's always sad when one, say, misses an update. seems like it's been far too long. But then, I get the wonderful two chapters in a row time!
yeee haa! I enjoyed the 2 chapters, I like how the characters are going...and luv inuyasha the perv boy. I'm so excited to see what happens next.

i don't know... introspection can be a necessary part of a narration in a character's development. giving the reader insights into the motivations and growth processes makes for a more realistic and rounded character. i didn't think that this chapter was overloaded with introspection, it was IMO essential to the development of the plot and to yasha and kagome's relationship... all in all it was rather entertaining.

a pleasure,
ginny

awesome truly awesome love it great plot and all that I'd kiss your feet but I don't like feet so I'll just bow and say job well done love the damn story. Ciao Kittenclaws

Interesting story so far. I love all the details you have put into this society. Personally I enjoy stories that focus primarily on the back story. It's rare to see any online stories that put much thought into anything other than the personal relationships between the main players. Overall you have a good balance in this story. I look forward to your next update. Ja ne!

ouch*
Poor kagome, i know living with Inu is gonna be
torture, those two set each other off!
Update soon k?

when emory comes back will he getting his position back?

seems yash is subconsciously playing the 'flower petal' game except it's: i want her here/i don't want her here. i want her to be comfortable/i want her to be miserable. i hate her/i have 'feelings' for her. etc.

i am so happy that you are writing this; there are a few authors like you out there who write with substance, with a perspective of the characters' emotions, motivations, personalities... who's descriptions are so rich in detail that the world, the characters, emotions, actions become real, take shape, are experienced and felt. alas, most readers are looking for a quick thrill and don't want to invest the intelligence and effort to read works of art that have literary worth. i am awed and excited by the power, the magic of the written word to transform the letters on a page to the reality of the author's imagination. i search for those authors/master artists, and in your work i have found one of them.

thank you for sharing this journey through your imagination.
ginny

I was reading your review responses and I have to agree that a great deal of the "good" stories seem to go unnoticed. I stumble upon one now and again always wondering how I missed it and how it never got recognized! As for detail, I for one LOVE the reality you are giving your universe. It makes everything more believable and much more interesting. I am really curious as to where this is going to go! Thanks for the update!!! And thanks for keeping us informed on your userinfo ... I admit to being a twitchy reader. I try to never say "update soon!" or some other such command because I realize that you aren't getting paid and have (*gasp*) a life - yet I practically stalk the stories I am reading.