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for A Fool's Redemption

by Grumblebear

person sweetkijo
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
****It's Wednesday!!! I can't wait anymore....!! Pleeeeease I beg of you, I am at your mercy...give a humble fan the next chapter. I'm sure it is perfect...flawless....amazing!! You never leave us unimpressed.....and if anyone was, well they suck monkey balls!! Tee hee! Now go on and rawk my sawks...and load it up...whoooot can't wait!! = )
Just another eager beaver fan.....lol
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It is so different from anything else I've ever read. Change is a good thing....I think it's why I like your story so much. I was getting bored reading pretty much the same old story over and over. I am amazed by your imagination. Keep up the great work! I cannot wait to find out what happens next!!!!
person raven28
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just read ch 1-9 and i wont to tall you i love it and cant what for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thank you for wrighting this it one ofthe best i have ever reade one here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person mariana
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
when are you gonna do the next chapter
person weyrdkat
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, sorry I didn't do chapter by chapter reviews, but I've read everything you've posted so far (ch.9) and I say screw those who look for 'Hit and Run' reads. If I'm looking for that, I'll read PWP. Your story has a lot of substance and interesting depth to formerly two dimensional characters. And you know grammar. . .and you can spell! That in itself is an act of mercy and kindness. I look forward to the rest of your story.

P.S. - Don't snub on the descriptions. You're doing great so far and with a world as incredible as this one, the little details go a long way to bring the story to life for all of us!
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I was wondering when you will post a new chapter? We've already read this one were you just editing? I am glad to see you are still out there it's been a while since we've heard from you. I hope all is well I assume uncontrolable circumstances kept you from posting. I really like this story it's very orginal.
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so good, so very good. and it is so logical and real in its flow. i love your tale, it really does flow like a river. but i bet that kagome could use a good cry. i know that i did.
person mariana
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
when is the next chapter comming
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story, so i hope you didn't give up on it. but this is not a review to rush you... =] i can't wait for the next chapter and i hope everything is going well... amazing story.
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to check in. This story is amazing. I think me and all of the entire fan-fiction addicts here are wanting to know..."Where the hell ya been??" We are missing you and this story something fierce. Ok, maybe its me, but hey..can you blame me?? I got no problem stating Im an addict. Anywayz, I really do hope everything is alright on your side of the world. I just wanted you to know I am thinking of you. Hope to read you soon, because my hentai ass is starvin for some hentai.....