rate_review Reviews

I spent almost a half an hour today searching for this story again...only to realize after I read chapter 10, that I had already bookmarked it -_-

Anyway, since I don't think I've reviewed this before (and I'm not entirely sure why I haven't), I just want to say that I LOVE this story. It's a fresh take on the Inu/Kag relationship with a great plot and interesting setting. At first, the Utopian city kind of threw me, but, as I read more, I realized that I kind of liked the idea. It's a good contrast, I think, to the cruelty of the place Inuyasha and Kagome came from.

Since going through each chapter and telling you what I liked would make this obnoxiously long, I'm just going to say that 1-9 were awesome and 10...well, I REALLY liked chapter ten >_< It's rare to find an author who can write that tension between Inuyasha and Kagome in such a way that I hang on to the edge of my seat just HOPING! ARG! It drives me crazy and I love it.

Great job so far! I'll be waiting anxiously for the next installment (and I'll remember that I've bookmarked it this time o_O).

this is so well written and has such a good story!
I hope you update soon! I didn't study for a physics test as much as I should have because I got caught up in the story.
hehe.

a new chapter!! i was so thrilled when i checked the story and saw there was a new chapter. and there was some spicy behavior going on- thank god. i loved the way you did it. it was sexy and understated but you felt the tension between them. it was great.
as for the setting, it doesn't detract from the story at all.
looking forward to another chapter soon!

This is such an awesome story please Update soon...

All i can say is wow omg amazing, I have never read anything that had me on the edge of my chair as that did, i cant wait till you update next really looking forward to it ^_^

OMFG...This Is Like...One of my top 5 stories! Thank God U updated! I was in the brink of tears everytime I cheked the story and noticed that there weren't any updates TOT
I'll wait even a year if that's what it takes for u to write the next chapter (Which I really hope u don't do, please...U really don't want someone killing because of you taking just an extemely long time to update TOT)
But I'm telling ya...I WILL wait...Hope u update soon though.
And I have to admit your word choice is excelent, the moment u were describing Sango's song and acting, I actually felt I was beside Kagome, and that I was hearing Sango singing live!! OMG. Completely beautiful...
Hope U've understood everything I've written LOL Sorry for bad grammar! Keep Up the excelent work!! See ya!

Very nice. Of course he would pull her in fully clothed. Only Inu...

Anywho, great chapter. I can't wait to read more. :)

Great update. I love where your taking your characters and the opera preformence was very well written.

Well until your next update,
Chanda

yay!!!

i have been reading this stopry really really late at nite and have been tired to review.. but because u left me a link..

for u i will review..

that was soo nice and long.. the characters seems soo multi- dimensional.. inuyasha has more to him than just like all the other fics as in mean and arrogant and rough with lack of a personality.. he seems more really.. (given his life problems and all) he seems like a real guy and many situations.. and i like that about this fic alot.. really. and he seemed to have this caring.. its like turning into a slow painful cancer, if u will. its like taking over him and he doesnt know how to react in many times.. again, its soo really.

i like how u make kagome an actual person with acutally people problems.. like fatigue and pain.. but even through it all she still forces it in the back of her mind and does all that she can do.. it kinda reminds me of like a mom.. cause well she's got a job, than a kid (hmm who could that be??), and she's still has friends..

i love how u descibed the WHOLE place.. all ur descriptions make u feel like ur their.. and i wanna LIVE THERE SOO BAD!!! oo well..

the tub fiasco.. was awesome.. the tension and than the playing was soo cute.. and at the same time it felt soo random.. i loved it.. about the whole fluffy thing.. i agree.. i don'na want him in here yet.. it would make u want the brothers to fight and detter from the story and plots that have been layed out..

all in all.. this fic.. is GREAT!!

update soon..

and yay for the nominations!!

Thank you thank you thank you!! The chapter was well worth the wait. I think some of the ice is breaking down around the two but I still think there is a long way for them to go. I think when he asked her the question of why didnt she go with him, it was kinda like he let her in a little. He has a lot of questions I am sure, and I am sure Kagome knows that too, but he has to ask them when he is ready. I have been wondering.....now I know that Kagome was a silent lifeline to him when he was held captive, but did he fall in love with her?? I know she did, you made mention of that in the begining to the story. But he was being tortured, and she was silently kind to him while torturing him....you know what I mean?? Was there any words between them before he was set free?? He asked why didnt she go with him.....so does that mean he came to her and asked and she declined?? I suppose that I will have to read the whole story to find out. The chapter was fun and I really enjoyed it. I do have to say I disagree with Drake, even though I think he rawks as an author.....I think your story and background is anything but silly....It is unique and very well thought out and I think it does this story great justice. I love it the way it is! Keep up the great work, and take care!