rate_review Reviews

Very well done! It is an excellent story, original and wonderfully insightful as to their characters. There were just a few punctuation errors, which shows that your beta is very good! I am loving your story. It would truly break my heart if you didn't finish it. Actually, you could change the names and then publish it under original fiction, because it really doesn't follow anything Inuyasha, but that is NOT a criticism. I am thinking that you need to make certain that writing is a permanent part of your life. It is a gift and you shouldn't waste something you are so very good at. Brilliance is its own burden.

Jane

I really like this story. I don't review many but this one is special. I can't give you the technical reasons why I think this is good but I feel it is. I couldn't write a story if my life depended on it but I have read a lot and I am very patient waiting for the next update. I am not your typical reader of fan fiction as I am much too old. I find your story very believable and you don't assume that I know the background of all the characters before I start. Your spelling and word usage is good or you have a really good beta or maybe both but it takes a good story to over look those kind of flaws.
Thank you for the story and keep it up

Loved your latest chapter! It was well worth the wait! Oh, the angst, and poor Kagome having to go into the bathroom, and see whomever, fondling Inuyasha! I will patiently await your next update!

Chanda

Hi! Just taking a break from writing my own story and happened to bump into yours. Here are three words for you: Amazing, Fun and damn Refreshing! And well if you want to be technical...those were four words, but I'm sure you get the picture.
As I began reading it, I understood what you mentioned about some readers quitting right after those first chapters. I began my story in much the same way and not going directly into the relationship of my characters. It's great to build an actual plot and not just have two people who meet, fall in love and then live happily ever after. It's just too cliche and boring!
Anyways, just wanted to let you knowt that I've loved absolutely everything about your fic. I especially want to commend you on how well you portray Inu Yasha. Everyone always makes him out as a stupid, ignorant and uncaring guy. I'm glad you did him the way you did.
Well, I'm totally keep your story as one of my favorites...so do update whenever possible. I know how life tends to get in the way sometimes!

Awesome. I really enjoyed this chapter. I don't care when you update, as long as you do!

she gave him a lot to digest, no wonder he was so moody. i guess that she is not only a reminder but she sacrificed for him and he doesn't seem to be the type who likes to be indebted to anyone.

jealousy, one wonders what she's going to find on the other side of that door and how she's going to react. one thinks she should keep a cool head and not react... she had to work in a research lab putting sentient beings through all sorts of torture and witnessed the murder and mutilation of 28 people, one would think she is capable of acting stoic when confronted with 'le menage a trois'.

very emotional chapter, eloquently executed.

Wow so gald to see you back at it again. I just love this story with such a passion! Can't wait to see chapter 11 really left us a cleffy didn't you lol. Anywho thanks again for a continueing to write!

Wow, you have no idea how excited I was to see you've updated. Im glad to see you back! Hope everything is getting better for you. Your chapter was fantastic. I cant beleive he just left with those girls. How heartbreaking. Now I pray you dont take tooooooo long for your next chapter because that was one hella of an angsty chapter you just gave us. My stomache just sank at the thought of him and those ho's. Well, until next time, take care. Thank you for the update!

This story is fantastic. The world is so...I don't know it just seems so realized. I found myself wondering where the inspiration for this world came from. Did it just pop into your head like that (gifted by the muses maybe). I love it, I loved the description of the underground. I wish I could see something like that. I also wish there was a way that I could fav this so I could always know when this is updated.

hi,
i was just wondering. will we be able to read another excerpt a month from now?
:D
looking forward to it if we can.

keep up the good work!