rate_review Reviews

I would just like to say that this is one of the best (if not the best) fics I have ever read. The story is original, there is actual thought put into the plot, the grammar and spelling are good, and the characters (despite being in a completely different world) are still in character for the most part. This also happens to be the first review I've ever made on this site so that in it of itself should say something. ^.^ If even someone as lazy as me feels the need to stand up and say something... all I'm saying is you should be VERY proud of your work. You have a gift.

Wow. This was awesome, as always. So. What was Kagura up to? Hmmm? I thought it was a bit intriguing how she reacted to Inuyasha's little slip. Especially now that Naraku is asking Kagome to go to the concert with him...hmmm...*LOL* It's great. It was hard to read about the shower scene, but I'm thinking I see now why it was so necessary. The whole confrontation between Kagome and Inuyasha in his room was wonderful. It was very mature (they didn't even yell at each other! ^_^) and it read like a turning point in their relationship. It was a tad OOC, but then again it's an AU so I'm not expecting total canonship. I really love the way you write Kagome and Inuyasha. Him calling her out in the elevator made me smile and almost do a little dance in my chair! *LOL* I saw a couple of typos, but I honestly don't remember where they were..sorry! I do know they were far apart and not many >_< Don't worry on the length, long chapters are always ok. You make them interesting so it's not like it's a bother or anything. The toughest read of the whole story was the beginning because you were describing places, which was very necessary and worth it. Your story is so "alive" now because of it. I can't describe it better than that. ^_^
Anyways, wonderful wonderful! Can't wait for the next!

-Yang

omg! please hurry and update! this is one of the best things i've read PERIOD in a coupl'a years now. you're fantastic, you really are. And i'm willing to bet that Miroku WORKS for Naraku? Maybe? Idk, that'd be a pretty nice place to hide that pervy monk, in the Black Prince's people. anywho... please update soon!

great update.

it's a great chapter. it makes the story move forward, which is refreshing, and I'm curious about what made inuyasha look at kagome like that in the end.

i think you did a great job with the whole Inuyasha-Kagome talk really. His explaining of what he was thinking is brilliantly sketched :D and I absolutely love the party scene... The way you ended it is absolutely perfect... I can't wait to read the next chapter... wonderful job!

Yeah, you updated! I did like this chapter, and Kagura is such a...well you know. I am glad that Inu and Kagome managed to have their talk, but now Naraku is staking claims on her. I wonder why she couldn't say no to Naraku? Now, she has accepted his date.

It didn't seem like you took that long to update, and I didn't mind the length of the chatper at all.

And of course, looking forward to your next chapter. I can see it's going to be mighty interesting.

Chanda

I'm way excited about the new chapter, when is it coming out?????

I want to marry you...
*cough* Yeah I read the last chapter preview, and, Oh My Lord, I loved it. It was excellent. I just really want to read the actual chapter. I love how you are so descriptive with emotions and what the character's feeling or thoughts are about something, you make it seem almost real. Like if they were actually just saying, thinking, feeling. Oh hell, I dunno If I'm explaining myself well, I hope I am lol.
Good Job, Thumbs Up, u deserve some ice cream!
I really hope you update the chapter sooner than later, haha, but don't worry I can wait. Just keep it up with those descriptions, you are really amazing at that.
I hope you have a good summer (even though Canada's first day of Summer is tomorrow, lol, random!)
*hugs* Do not rush, but do not stop either!

Bye Bye!, Atte: Ryoko

I would just like to say, AWESOME STORY!!!! I love this story. It's really well written, it's very different than anything else i've ever read both in the fanfiction and actual fiction realm. You have a very good mind! I can't wait to read the next chapters!!!