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Holy crap. Read this all in a day. Went to hit the next chapter and it wasnt there. O.m.g. when he hit the glass and it shattered... Her little "happy" comment while freezing. Fuckkkkkkk. I was so mad 2 chapters ago i almost put it down but made myself keep going. 

So glad i did!

Please update soon

 I need more. 

Hello again (^_^)/
Decided I'd pop by and see if there has been any news or updates... Seems not :'( *sigh...sniffle*
Part of me still hangs on as a faithful reader that you may return someday. Even if you were to rewrite this as an independent story- forget the fan fiction part and instead develop original characters to live out the story- I'd fucking buy that book.
I hope all is well for you at least, and that you're still alive out there writing. You are too talented to not keep it up :)

Ciao

I'm only saying this because I like it so much, but dude, fuck you for not finishing this story. Seriously. As a fairly recent member of the fandom, the amount of heartbreak I experience whenever I allow myself to read a good unfinished story is insane. You're so mean.

I first started reading this story a few years ago, and was so sad when there were no more updates. It's a great story, with so much potential to be epic. Strong character development and a strong writing style in general.

I come back and reread the whole thing, or just my favorite parts no and then, hoping to see a new chapter.
I really enjoy your writing and hope you come back to this story.

I love this story. I really hope life allows you to finish it and continue on with the sequel. The scenes you created took my breath away, just reading them. I cannot imagine how it would feel to actually see them, but I would absolutely love it. It was amazing to watch their relationship emerge; the feelings were there, but time, fear, anger, and pain concealed them. I actually guessed who Miroku was, sorry lol. I was wondering how you were going to handle Sesshomaru being Inuyasha's brother in this storyline; that was a great way. I actually was thinking that what Naraku did with Inuyasha would be the same way the white prince left. Maybe he held Rin hostage? I would love to see Sess/Rin (adult Rin) and San/Miroku romance mixed in next time. Never fear with long chapters, I love them lol. Honestly, other than the characters looks and names, I could see this story being a novel all its own. And novel chapters are 25- 30 pages usually so it fits lol. The characters have their basic personalities, but you changed them through their life experiences and positions in their current lives. They fit them, but could easily be any character you created to fit those events. Again, I hope all is well for you, and I will be keeping an eye out for more :)

I'm so disappointed. I wanted an ending or a sequel or something. Lol

This was so well written I am now a fan. Love the characterisations and though I have not seen the anime, I'm enthralled. I want to know what happens so please hurry with the next chapter!

I heard about this story from a friend, they said it was pretty awesome but warned that it may have died out seeing as it hasn't been updated in years. Not to mention the cliffhanger! But I started reading anyways and couldn't stop until I finished ch. 19. It was brilliant! Loved it. :) and REALLY hope you continue it. Or at least let us know you will be continuing it. While I understand you're desire for readers to spare a few moments to write you a review, you should also spare a few moments every few months to at least let your dedicated followers know you haven't abandoned them. (The friend that shared this story with me has been reading & rereading it since '09)
The creativity, imagery, story pace, angst and excitement. All very good qualities to AFR. The ups and downs in K&I's relationship are believable, and there aren't so many that it's like an annoying soap opera. Little moments between them feel special, you're writing is very good at capturing that.
Anyways, I will share this story as well, maybe with more recent reviews you will have renewed enthusiasm for this story :D
Ciao!

I only review only if the story is really really interested. Great story. the plot us really nice. I know you are busy with your life, but please finished the story.

Can't wait for the rest :)