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I really like this story. Poor Inuyasha, so much pain but also love and hope. Can't wait till for next chapter. Thanks, Starchilds

Even if Inuyasha dies I think his son should kill Naraku. It would be both ironic and appropriate for the product of Naraku's lust to destroy him. I see Inuyasha's son being raised by Sesshomaru on stories of his strong and noble father\mother. From an early age the boy loves and idolizes his father\mother and hates Naraku, hates him with a passion. He begs Sesshomaru to teach him to fight in all ways he knows how and after a while Sesshomaru reluctantly agrees, even hiring other types of fighters to teach him until the body surpasses even his uncle.

Then comes the day he leaves to fight his 'father'. And slaughters him with absolute ease, in fact he could even play with Naraku, as in 'a dog with a bone' and he has inherited his 'fathers' sadistic streak. I just like the image of someone as powerful and graceful as Sesshomaru moving around, easily avoiding his blows and tricks and totally pissing Naraku off.

I have this vision in my head of an young man with demon marks, Inuyasha's ears, claws and Naraku's dark hair and eyes standing over the twitching dying remains of the Hanyou. With his last breath Naraku rasps out a question "who and what are you??"

To which the son answers something like "You remember an violation you did ----ago?(you choose his age). Well guess what, this is your punishment. Say hello to 'mom' when you get to the otherside. I hope he kicks your butt when you get there." To which Naraku dies, a wail of anger and helplessness on his lips.

Miroku better go and help Inuyasha or I'll kick his but. Poor Sesshoumaru is doing everything in his power to help his little brother. I love Sesshoumaru. It is too bad their relationship is only that of brothers since Sesshoumaru deserves to have Inuyasha as his own.

You need to finish this darn story I have been waiting come on I'm waiting for an update

I'm so lovvvin this story please finish this story I gotta know what the monk is gonna do or will it just the brothers raising the kid........commmmmme on

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i'm glad that you decided to continue this story. it's one of the few that tries to convey the true emotions of the scenario you've chosen. i hate it when someone writes of a rape, and then has the victim fall in love with the rapist. your story has a more believable quality. i hope you continue it.

Hello again,
where is chap 12?
I have just finished reading ch 11 and I want to know more....
Do not be that cruel and please, post as soon as you can :-)
see you

Thank you for updating it.
I have just got it to read.
I DO love angst. (Evil smile) kukukukuku...

HI,
Keep writing the fiction, it is really interesting.
where is chap 11?
do not let me in the dark PLEEEEEEAAAASEEEEEE... lol :-O