rate_review Reviews

awesome when r u going to continue?

I've already read this fic, and I was wondering are you gonna finish it?

Wow, that was pretty good. There was a typo, but that means nothing. I liked how dark it was, I especialy enjoyed the demetia of Inuyahsa. However there were a few things that I thought you should clarify or put more detail into. Like whhat happened to her paretns home and what became of the well. Kilala, wether or not she died, and what ever became of Shippou. The last thing is why did she not recodnize the company, surely the name Taisho.

Thats is about all, Other than that I thought this story was really good so far. I would love to read more.
~Lyn

Note: This was not a flame, just what I thought.

Hey, just wanted to see if you were going to continue this story. It has lots of potential and I hope that you do. You have a very nice writing style and are able to portray you characters well.

is there more to this

I am inclined to express my love for your fan fiction "Mending a Broken Heart." With this being said I hope you realize my true intent on writing this review was that ask (almost begging) for you to continue this piece of well written literature.

Thank you, and again PLEASE continue soon.

From,
A Passionate Reader

Please update soon! it's a great story!

Hey , you are back !!!!! I have waited soo long for this fic to be updated, nice to hear that you are reposting it and that the writer's block is over, I can't wait to read what is next (Where you left it last time )
All the best

Well, that certainly was sad, and dark, and disturbing. Inuyasha went mad over Sango and Miroku dying (and his guilt, and left Kagome all those years ago. And Sesshoumaru invites her to meet with him, (though she didn't know it was him), only to bring her back into contact with Inu, who rapes her. Whoa. Nice writing -- you really sucked me right into this one. What will Sess do?

i like it plaese update so i can read more