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for Dark Carnival*Ch. 1 edited*

by Pucedragon

person ferral
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is such a great story, I hope you update it soon!
person No bunni
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful more please
person Cassie
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Finally, a story that is original. I hope you do continue it. Thanks for the great read. I thought that hardly anyone knew about creature feature. My best friend would love you.
person chanda
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it... but I would have to agree...freak show...that's so harsh. But I understood why you used that term, in this story. Other than that, it's original and well thought out. Look forward to see where this is going.

Until next time,
Chanda
person Virgie
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep going i want to find out what happens very interesting very interesting but truth be told i would go to a carnival like that in a heart beat Freak show and all you know that Freak shows are actually illegal in most parts of the U.s. I don't know if it is all or most but its still illegal