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what can i say, your story caught my eye right away. once i read i wanted more....soo keep going i can't wait for the other chapters. i guess you got another fan at your feet..GREAT JOB!!!!!!!

I really like what you have so far. Very dark and cool. I love how you used those lyrics for the carnival barkers. It really fit well. I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep it up!

i liked it keep it up

i say, you should totally write the next chapter for this ASAP! but dont forget about the crow... unless you finshed it. i dont know, im sick, i dont remember if you did or not. but whatever. i like this story a lot so far :]] and the song

This is a really good.. Ill be very interested to see where you take this!

PLEASE PLEASE update i have never read a carnaval fic as good as this one!

well as much as i'm offended by the use of the words "freak show" since i worked with a carnival and then for a french canadian circus most of my life we don't call it freak show anymore it's offensive as much as it used to be traditional it's now calle a side show many of my friends are part of the side shows and they to find offense to the once used terms "freak show"... that said i do like how this may be going and it's very well written... the barkers catch's aren't badly written but perhaps you could make it more catchy? other then that i like can't wait for the next update

It's an interesting idea so far (hoping there will be more). I would really like to see more of it. Please continue it.

Very good, can't wait till i see more!

Yay! This is awesome, exciting, and dark! IT'S WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Please continue when you have the time!