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for Dark Carnival*Ch. 1 edited*

by Pucedragon

schedule August 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Please come back and finish this story. It's an interesting and original start. 

schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far. Please continue soon!
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dark creepy good though i wonder how will she escape please write the next chapter i beg of you *bows his head* your very good
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omgg that was greaattt please continue i love the plot!
person Katie
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't have an account on here yet, but I think this is a fresh new plot for the Inu-cast. I can't wait to see how this story turns out. (I'm also currently reading other stories of yours.)
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i love it..
i can't wait until the next chapter comes out.
person suikidoen
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.o omg this really does send shivers down my spine... but!! i'm hooked =3 agnst might not be my thing but meh a good horror/agnst fic is a good thing =). i shoulda known naraku was running this thing i'd be suprised if it wasnt..O.O
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story has an interested beginning. Kagome, Inu and the other "freaks" taking down the evil ringmaster could be a great story. With the darkness that you have implied here in the first chapter, you may get some descenters, but don't worry.

Drop me a line when you decide to update.
person SakuraWings
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the suspense you've built up. I hope you continue.
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, I am looking forward to reading more of it.