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ohhhhh i love happy endings and stories that have an happy endings ha ha

whoop!

that was one doozy of a lemon. but i loved it neway.

very good i love the ending, every is solved,

Yes, I am going to finish this story... I am working on the final chapter as I type this. I understand that you want to read the final chapter, but MEGAN, you need to understand that some people have lives other than writing fanfiction. I work a full time job managing a major music store, which requires a lot of my time. I am a wife; and I am mother to an 18 year old son who is graduating from high school in less than a month... so on top of my stressful job, I am also trying to get my son set up in college, and manage the whole graduation and prom affairs in the little bit of time I have at home each day.

I am sorry to disappoint you, but writing fafiction comes last in my priorities, and writing in your review...
"Are you going to finish this story or not?"...
is not only sort of rude; it is certainly not inspiring me to hurry up and post the last chapter.

Furthermore, while I am on the subject, I am sure that there are others out ther that would like an answer to this question.

Is - "I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?" - this the only thing you know how to type.

I ask this because you use the exact same review on every single fanfic site. Generally when people review, they let you know what they think about specific chapters or events contained therein, sometimes the entire story, but as a general rule, they let you know what they like about it or don't like about it. Think about THAT before you review any of my stories again... because frankly, your generic trademark review gets old.

a little bit miffed,
Sesshys_Jaded_Samuri

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Are you going to finish this story or not?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Everything felt so forced to me in this story. It really didn't have a natural flow, it was almost like you had to make everyone else so harsh and Sesshoumaru so nice by comparison or the relationship would never have come about, as a result their personalities were destroyed. Lemons are fine, wonderful in most situations, but you shouldn't short the rest of the story just get to the lemon. What happens in between the sex scenes is just as important. Just a humble opinion.

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

aw.

that was really sweet.

though rin being such a hoe bag kinda ruined it. nasty little skanki-fied hoochie.
newho. loved it though. update soon!