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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a extremly very well writen story. the way you write makes me and most likely other readers feel like they are in the story. you make it seem as if they are a couple, not two beings fooling around foolishly. you are an excellent writer! the way you write, once again, makes the reader feel like rin and sesshomaru are truely a couple simply trying new methods lol. i love it! please continue writing more and if i think of anything i will be sure to slap in a few ideas. i love it! you are one of very few writers on this and every other fanfiction site that, if your tried, you may acually make it in the real world by writing romance books.
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February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! A one-shot series. Good work on this one too. So Sess likes being blindfolded eh?
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February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooooohhhhhhh! You got Sesshomaru to beg! Way to go! That was HOT! Update soon~B reading U!
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was another good chapter!
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright!!! Rin was in control is time......you do a great job everytime....keep it up...
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yum! That was both sexy and cute! Nicely done!
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^_^ i liked it ^_^
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was entertaining!
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm very nice-- I rather like seeing the softer side of Sesshomaru. I like adult Rin! You did a nice job here!
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was so good.....I'm glad they took the ban of the site....I want to review this story this 8:00 am pacific time ....keep up the great work