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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome .. and i think inuyasha and sango make a good match ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
angel
angel
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love this story, i cant wait till u update. Ur a great writer.
Laura
Laura
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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This review will go back a few chapters, cause I haven't had time to read any of the up-dates till today....
Okay, thank you for giving her a bit back bone, and haveing the Flea explain it a bit. I am happy they might mate earlier than they planned, and can't wait for Kumino -whatever- to arrive! That is just going to be fun to read! I am happy that kouga has FINALY moved on and that Ayame has no bad feelings towards KAgs. Though I am also happy that Miroku confunted Sango, I am also sad, cause she was hurting. I am happy because sango in later chaps is feeling better, and happy that Sango and Inu are falling in love, and that Miroku is learning his lesson on wishes, that they sometimes come true when you dont really want them to. I am happy with how Kags hadled the pig, and how Sesshy is being more...'feeling' towards her as she had requested!
I am sorry for takeing so very long to review, and am glade that you comented on how you are sorry about her attitude changeing slightly and that you will keep a closer eye on it.
Thak you for Up-dateing, and HAPPY MARCH!
TTYL;
megan
Okay, thank you for giving her a bit back bone, and haveing the Flea explain it a bit. I am happy they might mate earlier than they planned, and can't wait for Kumino -whatever- to arrive! That is just going to be fun to read! I am happy that kouga has FINALY moved on and that Ayame has no bad feelings towards KAgs. Though I am also happy that Miroku confunted Sango, I am also sad, cause she was hurting. I am happy because sango in later chaps is feeling better, and happy that Sango and Inu are falling in love, and that Miroku is learning his lesson on wishes, that they sometimes come true when you dont really want them to. I am happy with how Kags hadled the pig, and how Sesshy is being more...'feeling' towards her as she had requested!
I am sorry for takeing so very long to review, and am glade that you comented on how you are sorry about her attitude changeing slightly and that you will keep a closer eye on it.
Thak you for Up-dateing, and HAPPY MARCH!
TTYL;
megan
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ha ha ha ha ha ha love this story
update soon
update soon
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story and can not wait for more please up date soon. fan
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I believe that you should give Kagome the back bone she rightfully deserves.Their deal was that on the Blood red moon he would help, and she would have his hier in one years time. Then you had him add all those other condisions and she COMPLIEDE with NO FIGHT!!! The regular Kags would not allow that, and would stalk out of there in anger! Her not seeing other males was not part of the original agreement they had...though I wouldn't have her with anyone else other than Sesshy though either...BUT that was not part of their agreement, and she should get pissed, because he is ordering her around -which might be preparing but STILL- and that ALSO was NOT part of their agreement! He was only using her for a powerfull hier and a good fuck! HE even told her that, IN FRONT OF EVERYONE ELSE TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I believe that you took away her back bone, and since she has not been experianceing those feelings he has, you should have her put up a barrior to keep him and all MALES out! Since she is sooo stong, that shouldn't be too dificult! It would serve the sexy Lord right to not be allowed near her until he told her the truth or left her alone for one year, when she would allow him to impregnat her, then she could put up another barrior and just leave after making sure her child is fine, because she would think -if she was the NORMAL Kags- that she is not wanted by the one she wants to want her in the same way she does, so she sees no ponit in staying, and she would visit to say 'hello' to her child -who would know that she is his/her mother- and then leave again.
I am sorry for this lecture on you story, and hope you Will continue, but you must realise that she is acting way OOC and that it just makes me fell like my beliefs in her are wrong, which I know is wrong...SINCE she calls Lord Sesshomaru JUST Sesshoumaru, and is not afraid to show her anger or anything!
It would please me, and maybe many others who are afraid to speak their minds, if you would make the change in her deamenior in the next chapter, because she is just acting different than the first chapter! It unsettles me! Please, make her herself once more!
I DO accknoledge that he is a Lord and all, but Kags is not from his time, and there for, I believe, the tradisions should not permit to her! Sesshoumaru is humiliating her, and she is takeing it sitting down! Sango should be pissed her 'sister' is being treated that way, and ask Kags for a stricktly privit talk at her old village, away from Sesshoumaru and all the other listeners! Then she can talk some sense into Kags!
Now, dont get me wrong! I love sesshy and would jump him if he was real and in the flesh, even though I am married...But even then! If he was to treat me the way he is treating Kags, his looks wont matter to me! Even though he is sexy, good looking, muscular, arrogent, stong, trust worthy, and slightly caring for certain beings HE SHOULD NOT TREAT HER OR ANY FEMALE THAT WAY! KAGOME IS NOT HIS SLAVE! SHE IS A WOMEN FROM THE 21st CENTURY, AND SHOULD ACT LIKE ONE!!!!!!!!!! RIGHT NOW SHE IS WAITING ON HIM HAND AND FOOT! I CAN UNDERSTAND, SEEING AS HIM PLEASUREING YOU AND FUCKING YOU MIGHT CLOUD YOUR MIND, BUT REALLY! NO SEX IS GOOD ENOUGH TO WAIT ON THE DUDES HAND AND FOOT WHEN YOU HAD ALLREADY MADE THE DEAL OR A CERTAIN THING, AND ADDED STUFFS DOES NOT COUNT IN SAID DEAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am sorry for pointing out the obvious to you, the author and ruler of this story, but Kags is just...GAHHHH!!!!!! *Grabbs the end of her hair and pulls hard* She ain't acting like a women from the 21st Century should! In a way she is disgraceing us and insulting our common sense not to bow and be obidient to some one who just wants us for sex and a kid! (I know, what about BSDM? That is Different than this...totaly different!) She should not have to wait on him, sense she could technicaly just relieve it herself, OR she could just find a new 'buddy' Which I would not usually support, but Sesshy is asking for it! A true 21 Century, independant woman would NOT put up with that, when she was only gaing a possesive demon, satifactory sex, and protection because of the hier she is going to birth for him later!!! He is, in my point of view if I was KAgs, just protecting her because he doesn't want ant one else to have a powerfull child like the one she will provide for him, because of their deal. HE IS GAINING MORE THAN HER IN THE DEAL COMPARTMENT!!!!!!!!
By the way, How much time has gone by since they first 'mated' or had sex, to put it bluntly? Because, since three Red Moons have happened and they happen like once a month or something, it should be close to the appointed one year...
Up-date Soon!
TTYL;
megan
PS: I am sorry about the long review...HEHE! I just got on a role...*shruggs*
I am sorry for this lecture on you story, and hope you Will continue, but you must realise that she is acting way OOC and that it just makes me fell like my beliefs in her are wrong, which I know is wrong...SINCE she calls Lord Sesshomaru JUST Sesshoumaru, and is not afraid to show her anger or anything!
It would please me, and maybe many others who are afraid to speak their minds, if you would make the change in her deamenior in the next chapter, because she is just acting different than the first chapter! It unsettles me! Please, make her herself once more!
I DO accknoledge that he is a Lord and all, but Kags is not from his time, and there for, I believe, the tradisions should not permit to her! Sesshoumaru is humiliating her, and she is takeing it sitting down! Sango should be pissed her 'sister' is being treated that way, and ask Kags for a stricktly privit talk at her old village, away from Sesshoumaru and all the other listeners! Then she can talk some sense into Kags!
Now, dont get me wrong! I love sesshy and would jump him if he was real and in the flesh, even though I am married...But even then! If he was to treat me the way he is treating Kags, his looks wont matter to me! Even though he is sexy, good looking, muscular, arrogent, stong, trust worthy, and slightly caring for certain beings HE SHOULD NOT TREAT HER OR ANY FEMALE THAT WAY! KAGOME IS NOT HIS SLAVE! SHE IS A WOMEN FROM THE 21st CENTURY, AND SHOULD ACT LIKE ONE!!!!!!!!!! RIGHT NOW SHE IS WAITING ON HIM HAND AND FOOT! I CAN UNDERSTAND, SEEING AS HIM PLEASUREING YOU AND FUCKING YOU MIGHT CLOUD YOUR MIND, BUT REALLY! NO SEX IS GOOD ENOUGH TO WAIT ON THE DUDES HAND AND FOOT WHEN YOU HAD ALLREADY MADE THE DEAL OR A CERTAIN THING, AND ADDED STUFFS DOES NOT COUNT IN SAID DEAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am sorry for pointing out the obvious to you, the author and ruler of this story, but Kags is just...GAHHHH!!!!!! *Grabbs the end of her hair and pulls hard* She ain't acting like a women from the 21st Century should! In a way she is disgraceing us and insulting our common sense not to bow and be obidient to some one who just wants us for sex and a kid! (I know, what about BSDM? That is Different than this...totaly different!) She should not have to wait on him, sense she could technicaly just relieve it herself, OR she could just find a new 'buddy' Which I would not usually support, but Sesshy is asking for it! A true 21 Century, independant woman would NOT put up with that, when she was only gaing a possesive demon, satifactory sex, and protection because of the hier she is going to birth for him later!!! He is, in my point of view if I was KAgs, just protecting her because he doesn't want ant one else to have a powerfull child like the one she will provide for him, because of their deal. HE IS GAINING MORE THAN HER IN THE DEAL COMPARTMENT!!!!!!!!
By the way, How much time has gone by since they first 'mated' or had sex, to put it bluntly? Because, since three Red Moons have happened and they happen like once a month or something, it should be close to the appointed one year...
Up-date Soon!
TTYL;
megan
PS: I am sorry about the long review...HEHE! I just got on a role...*shruggs*
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, this has been a good day. O_o if i was Kagome and heard what he had thought i don't know what i would do. more chappies please