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for Happy Bath Ending

by sweetsatincocoa

person mamarita
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am glad the Sango is now out of the picture. I didn't like the way that part of the story was going anyway. I really am enjoying this story and can hardly wait for Hime to be born. Then the real fireworks can begin. Will we have an end to Naraku after all? DLS
person nchsmi
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The chapter is great, so far. Knowing you, I have a feeling it's not finished yet. So I can't wait to read the rest of it! I love little Junko! That kid is great. I loved the way Junko smelled Sango's true intentions out. I guess Kagome was truly blinded by old feelings. But, why is she with Kouga? Didn't she say that demon babies were stupid? Doesn't she yet realize that staying with a demon, she's bound to be around demon babies! Great chapter!
B reading U!
L8r!
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
now we are getting to the good parts.
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Updated...but now you've left us with ???. Oh ur good. Mean but good! Update soon please!
person wolfluv
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
TWISTED AND BEAUTIFUL AS ALL WAYS!!! I truly love reading your story!!! I feel for Sango though poor thing.... But I LOVE SESS MOM she rocks and the way you've discribed and written her would just about give Naraku a run for his money when it comes to witts!!!

I wonder what a confrontation between those two would be like her sharp mind and tongue would dice him up so fast I don't think he'd even realise she eviserated him physically until it was time to go to the bathroom! AS ALL WAYS A PLEASURE!

I am sorry for what ever is going on, from what you wrote things are not all sunshine and dasiys for you, I do hope however that the sun will be tilting your way to make your life a little easier then what's going on currently!

THANK YOU FOR UDATING!!!
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok now what??
person KIKI441
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i just finished reading the two parts that was added to chapter 16. and as
usual it wa great. so, is sango under naraku's spell? or has she just gone
crazy? anyway, she might have had a chance to kidnap the baby if it was
just sesshomaru and inuyasha but with sesshomaru's mother there, i don't
think she will let sango anywhere near the baby. sesshomaru's mother is
quite sharp and intelligent she may be the only one to sense something
is wrong. that is, if you're going to let sango come there pretending to
still be inuyasha's friend.

well updade as soon as you can because this story just gets better each time you update.
person nchsmi
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh is right! This story is driving me nuts!!!! Keep it up, and please for the love of god, Rin keep your ears clean from now on!! We don't want Oka Oka having a fit all over you!
I'm lovin' it! B reading U~ L8r!
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
come on come on.. this is so mean. you have too up-date soon. you are killing me..
person mamarita
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! This is amazing-- just hurry up and update, please. DLS