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for Happy Bath Ending

by sweetsatincocoa

person wolfluv
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's all ways a pleasure to read your story! It's never a dissapointment! This was one of the more intence chapters yet to be! Love the begining of it though! Poor INU finding out that way.... hee hee hee he.... LOVED the fact Sess wasn't put out at all!!! Maybe Inu will take advantage of being able to have multipal OOOOOOO'S..... hee hee heee...


THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!

SORRY TO READ YOUR NOT FEELING WELL AT ALL!!!! Well I hope you feel better soon!
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
someone always have to die. let's see them fix this.
person mamarita
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you completed the chapter. I know things will turn out okay for Sesshomaru and InuYasha, but it's the path to that place that is so confounding. Please update soon... DLS
person KIKI441
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i just finished reading the addition onto chapter 18 and i
can't believe what the oracle said. please say it isn't
so. inuyasha is g oing to die. it can't be true.
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that might have been short, but it was very hot. they do have great sex together all the time. i need a man like sess. lol lol
person nchsmi
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome lemon! The chapter was great so far. I say so far, because I know it's not done! You always seem to add more to a chapter later. So I'll add more to my review later! ;-p

B reading U!
L8r!
person mamarita
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First- hope you are feeling better. Now- this story is so much fun. InuYasha's female body - and the way he reacts to it is amazing. The lemon was wonderful. Please update soon! DLS
person KIKI441
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i have just finished reading the update to chapter 17 and it
was wonderful. i just love the way how you had sesshomaru's
mother knew who naraku truly was. but one question, when naraku
said inuyasha would be helpless during the full moon. are you
talking about when inuyasha turn human? i ask because inuyasha turns
human during the new moon not the full moon. but like i said you
could be talking about something else that will happen during that
time.

but anyway, why does naraku want to kill the baby? is it because
he is afraid what will happen if the child lives? if it is he
shouldn't worry because i think he should worry more about the
rampaging parents then about something that will happen years
from now because from the way sesshomaru's mother spoke. she
is going to skewer naraku long after he is dead. anyway, will
you be telling us more about his black pearl she want onigumo
to steal.

again, wonderful extension to the chapter. i can't wait until the
next update.
person wolfluv
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
much better then yesterday! As always a pleasure reading your story!!!! Yea you've add a chapter!!!

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice. now we know where sessy get's his ways from. lol lol