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Always a pleasure 2 read 1 of ur chapters, even if it's only a half a chapter. Get well soon- B reading U!

another great one.

I LOVE this story!!! I am waiting (not so patiently...argggggg need more *drool*) for more of your amazing story to be posted. I hope it comes soon *puppy eyes* lol. One thing I do have to say though is....Chisato only had one arm...don't get me wrong I'm glad that she got it back as is implied by the story but...how???? XD *cringe* don't hit me please I assume it was just a minor slip-up saying she had two arms but it would be nice to give her her arm back by some cool...maybe magical way....maybe she can just grow it back faster because she's older & more powerful??? Anyways, keep up the great work and I can't wait for the next section! *kiss* all my love going out to you! ;)

I just found this story and HOLY SHIT!!!! HOW DID I MISS THIS!? I always look for this pairing AND it's Mpreg!!! When will Naraku and Kagome's ass gonna get kicked? Will it be bloody? Can you have Naraku have a swift kick in the balls in the story? *wags tail* Or just kill him how ever way you plan it, it'll be great ether way. XD

I can't wait for the Inu and Sess's baby to be born and I LOVE Sess's mom! She's soo cool! Is she yours or is she Ooc? The sister's are great also!! I couldn't stop reading about their love lives.

I can't wait for the next chapter! Err... sorry for the long rant?

I love how you make Kagome so evil, I really hate her and it's always fun to see Sesshy beat her up a little in a story. I love Sakura and her tanto too bad she didn't find Kagome, but you wouldn't have her to screw with anymore, and that would be no fun. Sweet scene with Sessh and Inu at the end, I'm glad they made up before the end of the chapter.

Kagome just needs to DIE already.... LOL
Wonderful chapter as always :)

That was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it! And see, I didn't threat U not once during the long, long, loooooooonnnnnnnnngggggggggggg, wait! I just wished th@ Sesshomaru had broke Kagome's neck!!!! Or @least let his mother do it! I'm sick of that chick!

B reading U!

L8r!

You tell'em baby! Take no shit from anyone, but me! Just kidding *smooches!* Great revision, good luck with your Bleach story! Til next time- B reading U!

I'm so, so happy you updated, this is one of the stories I've been checking for an update. Sorry you got flamed, some people are such asses. Not having read the flame myself I don't know what it said, but it sounded like it probably had something to do with said person thinking characters being OOC, deviating form the story line, or some crap like that. As far as I'm concerned it would be pretty boring if everyone's stories were canon. Anyhow, in reality it's really hard to tell what's OOC anyway considering these characters were never in the situations we write then into when they were in the manga. Really the only person who could even accurately say anything about it would be Rumiko Takahashi herself. You're a great writer, and it takes some courage to write something, and then put it out there for other's to read and critique. Flames are for lack of a better word just stupid, why even bother? And someone that doesn't even write certainly has no business at all flaming you. I think your story is awesome. So many people stop working on their fics, I'm glad you've kept going with yours.

I'm sorry; I know I just reviewed, but I found the flame, and I'm glad you kept it up so the rest of us could see how rude, and ridiculous the person who wrote it was; many people probably would have removed it. I checked the profile too... nothing there. No one should EVER be so terrible to someone, but a person with no stories has absolutley no business whatsoever writing something like that. Reviews that aren't completely positive should at least be constructive critisism, not an attempt to totally rip a person and their hardworking attempt at creativity.

I really would like to see the person who wrote that flame write a story. In fact I hope the flamer see's this, because flamer I CHALLENGE YOU TO WRITE A FIC, and not a canon where you can basically copy the existing story line, do something difficult, do something hard; put the characters in a situation they've never been in before like sweetsatincocoa has, and let's see how good you can do!

Those of us who write do it because we enjoy it, and we put up our work to share with others. I can't speak for everyone, but not everybody is trying to keep the characters totally in character, and there's nothing wrong with that, it's called "creative license". And not everybody is writing to please others, they write what they want, they write the story that is in their head and who likes it likes it.

Sorry I went off there, I normally wouldn't bother with something so completely petty, but that really pissed me off. This story is interesting, and creative, and extremely good, but even if it was the worst fanfic ever written no one should ever be so incredibly unkind!

I totally understand if you remove this since it really isn't a review. I just had to defend another writer, not that you needed it you wrote a great rebuttal in the latest chapter, but I was just compelled to do it. Anyway keep writing the way you already do, and ignore that shit!