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for Happy Bath Ending

by sweetsatincocoa

person mamarita
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I can say, is I am really loving this story and want you to continue, please... This is getting really good now!
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YEA!! A new chapter! Please keep it up, I check everyday for updates so bring it on!
person nchsmi
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Where the hell do you come up with some of this shit? Do you get flashbacks from childhood? Rules your to live by, by father! I almost fell out of my chair when I read the first half of this. It's was like my father was talking to me! It's also a double whammy, because just last week, I caught my husband disipling our oldest son. It was so funny, he was saying stuff like, 'If you friends jumped off the Charles River bridge, would you do the same?' and 'Money dosen't grow on trees, G-damn it! Close the front door!' It was a riot! Especially when our daughter told him, 'But, daddy, paper grows on trees and isn't money made from paper?' Child, after that I was through!!! I also enjoyed the little tender moment with Sess and Inu. Someone should tell Sess, don't ask such sensitive questions if he's not ready for the answers. 'You want the truth? You can't handle the truth!' Someone should wash both those girls mouths out with soap, I'm surprised Sess didn't hear them, seeing how he has 'super sensitive' hearing and all! Anyhoo, great job! I so love this story, keep it up and update soon. This was kindof a long review, huh. Love ya and B reading U!
person DINKA
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved the chapter... cute ending!!!
funny thing with miroku... good touch of comedy/love with him!!!

and... wow... rin changed so much... from a fine little lady to a fluid-mouth girl!!! hope sesshy doesn't hear her... or he would be really upset!!! no kidding!!! good change, though!
person nchsmi
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the name change for chapter 12! Yay! Miroku finally got some real lovin! I hope it all works out! Kagome? Who the hell wants to see that brat? Or Kikyo for that matter? I don't get the joke, but it could be because I'm overworked and undersexed. So could you send me a tiny hint? Pweasseee! I promise I won't tell! Great job- B reading U!
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The best thing Kagome can do for herself is go to Kouga and get on with her life if she wants to stay in the past. I hope Inuyasha has twins and make Sess faint...though with him being so detached at times I don't think he could faint.
person mamarita
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad you ended chapter 12 where you did, and hey, Kagome can be pushed over a cliff for all I care!!! This is a great story- please keep going!
person mamarita
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
through chapter 12... this is fun! I wonder what kind of advice InuYasha could possibly give to Miroku. Please write more, soon.
person nchsmi
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All right Sexy! Finish this chapter soon! B reading U!
person Jan
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Suzuka! But I have to say that I too am curious as to why, Miroku pulled away from her so suddenly?!

Please update soon ^_^