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I really like and I am curious on how the story plays out!!! so i really hope you update soon!!! Oo and some smut preferrably one containing sessh would be nice but that is just me loving inu and sessh smut! hehehe

what an interesting story. i am so glad i came back to read it.
i had started to read it at first but then my computer crashed
and when i got it back up. i've been too busy to finish it but
i just finished re re ading the entire chapter and it was
great.

so i take it sesshomaru and naraku is going to see who is going
to get inu in bed first? i can definitedly see naraku making such
a bet.

anyway, i hope you update this one along with the others because i want
to see what happens next.

Oh now this is going to get good, I can feel it. You have to update this one soon.

Your idea is interesting, but your start is very rough. Also, having Inu-yasha's youkai talk to him is kind of annoying. Maybe Myoga could be the one delivering these lectures. It would make more sense. I mean, a youkai is a very intense primal thing, not like an internal lecture. You seem to be trying to make Inuyasha very sensual and sexy, but having him spout crude statements all the time is not really doing it. Maybe a little more subtlety is needed? Not that INUYASHA himself is subtle, but more like an unconcious sensuality. Anybody can say the word 'fuck' and make crude and slutty statements.

All that said, I think the premise is interesting. It's shaping up a lot better than most 'modern day' Inuyasha AUs do.

This is interesting! Cant wait to see what happens next in this story and your others!!

WOW! I'm intrigued. I can't wait for more-- please update soon. You have such wonderful styl;e and flair here. Like you can close your eyes and see it. It kinda reminds me of a drunken night put with my freinds that happened last year LOL

Great job!

Good start a little confusing but good. I hope that Sess is the one that gets pregnant because their are very little Sess fic out there.

Update soon

wow. I like it. I appreciate all the detail you've put into this. I can really see what's going on. I hope that you update this soon.