rate_review Reviews

mmm on Kagomes bed-- how fitting *makes whimpers*.... So am I right to assume theres some lemons on the horizons?

Oh let their be....LOL! Great job!

I loved this story when you had it up the first time. The first chapter seems now more narrative( without the actual verbal fight between them). I did like that part too (showed the discord between them)hee hee. Remember when redoing your work, its easy to overdo the editing. Believe me , I did it so much when I used to write. I'd write something and when I would go back I'd end up rewriting almost the whole thing ( and it didn't always make it better, for me anyways.hee hee). Well keep up the good work. It really was an awesome story.