rate_review Reviews

Words can't describe how god this story is, will you be making a sequel to the sequel?

That was the best story I have ever read, and I'm including the prequel in this review. I read them both before I reviewed, and I gotta say I want more. Please if you get the time I would almost pay for another sequel. thank you!

Well much like the first story this one has potential as well. You still leave out a lot of details and you rushed it as well. I believe this is a good rough draft if you go tho it add some more details, maybe even a thicken the plot. It seemed as if their wasn't anything there the story was short and your first one lacking was better.All in all it was a decent story and maybe if you read this review your go threw it to revise it. Keep up the good work.

~~Sieg

Wonderfull; this one and the first. God knows I'm a sucker for a happy ending!

Nice story. So the old group is back together and what now. Will you continue your story of the perfect day or will you end it here and I must say your writing was great besides a few miss spelled words but other than that it was great

I really love this story it was
sweet. I really love how
Mirkou,Sango and Kaede came back into
Kagome and Inuyasha's live again. Again
great story.