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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must say this story is very well written, and believable. Excellent job. I will be watching for updates, so keep up the good work and I look forward to where you will be taking us on this story. Too many times there are poorly written stories that recieve reviews, and not enough good ones get encouragement. Your grammar and structure is impressive, not to mention that you know how to form and create believable dialogue. Cheers... Oushiza
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story, I promise to follow this
one. Can't wait till chapter 3.
one. Can't wait till chapter 3.
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
backwoods pennsylvania huh? i live in pittsburgh and yes, nothing goes on after 10pm if you're looking for anything to do other than in the city and immediate suburbs... unless you're willing or able to travel you will be stuck taking any grunt job you can find. realistic and well written.
thank you,
ginny
thank you,
ginny
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ABSOLUTLY LOVE IT-- the plot is good and almost believeable! Great Job