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"I'm on my way honey" what a sucker Inuyasha is
Kikyo got him hook line and sinker, anyway nice
cliffy, can't wait till the next update.

Ohhhh drat *clings to cliffie and waits.....

Ok so I love how you made Sesshomaru so cold and professional, do I smell a bit of office conflict with he and his brother? Perhaps some hot office sex on a desk with he and Kagome???

HAHA ANd Yashie??????? Kikiyo calls him Yashie??? ROFL?? Dude, this chick is seriously messed up and I smell a trap-----the poor soft hearted slob can't help himself but to try and save every woman in distress he meets can he?

Very good job!! More soooon please!

Chapter 4 is just great, I love the cliffy
Can't wait till the next chapter.

60 miles huh? i'm between carnegie and bridgeville, southwest of the burg. if you ever come into town, drop me a note (e-mail on profile page) and we'll meet up!

your story, i can relate, a slice of real life... please don't have everyone call him 'inu', it's like his nickname is 'dog', "hey dog." *shivers* ~yash or yasha sounds more like a 'mill hunky' purely pittsburgh (my 'pittsburgh/slavic/hungarian' roots are showing).

=)
ginny

*claps* Bravo!!! Bravo!!!! Cant wait to see how this turns out. And I love the insertion of Gold Digger-- that is truly Kikyo's theme here eh? So is InuYasha gonna call her back? Maybe just to tell her to F*** off??? Sooo many possibilities! And what up with Sesshomaru *pokes ol' Lord Fluffy Woo Woo*... what does he plan to do to poor InuYasha????

*hops* Need more!!!

Yeah I gotta give ya some credit here for Primal Scream LOL! I was missing something-- I just knew I was-- the story needed something sooooooo maybe now we can figure out what it is and get on with it. Not givin' away too much BUT it may surprise a LOT of people how it turns out!

Yup, that was very enlightening. (Curiosity killing that damn cat still. Not to mention, I can get over anxious while reading stories... Grins.) Enjoyed this chapter a lot. Your grammar skills and word usage is some of the better that I have seen used in fanfiction. (I am a certified Secondary (as in grades 7-12) English teacher and am subbing right now. I just finished college.)

was the star wars thing a joke? Because, the guy that did that was star trek.

Wow. You got this new chapter up fast. I really like this story so far. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Hmmm... working two jobs. That's a lot of work. (Been there and done that around college as well.) I can't wait to see how he handles Kikyo. Is she just going to leave messages, or is she finally going to get aggressive?

Well, good story.

Kudos to chapter 3 I just love it
I love how you did the back ground on
Inuyasha and Kikyou, I can't wait till
chapter 4. Will there be some back
ground on Kagome? I know, I know
read chapter 4. Anyways till next time
stay cool;)

Another good chapter-- no EXCELLENT. Ya know I can almost see InuYasha in a call center hahhahahahaha, you wrote it so well.

I can see him taking calls and getting pissed off and slamming his fist down, ramen noodles go everywhere, and he starts yelling at the person "Listen you JACKASS!"

ROFLMAO!!!!!

And Kikyo as a coke dealer/addict is a twist I really didn't expect but it lends well to the plot. Now its beginning to sound like MY life with the drug addict ex (in my case bf)who wont go away and pops up in all the wrong moments! So I am looking for more as soon as possible :)

*goes off to work on Primal Scream*