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for Good Girl

by sydz2

schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
whoa brutal sesshomaru
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy fuck so little words such huge impact, I actually just stumbled upon this budding fic and I am begging u to continue, plz. I know its been a long time. Plz. my email is scarlet_witch_extreme@hotmail.com, if u wanna holla at me. Plz continue the fic
person razgriz
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please make this story longer please
person marcia
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Makes a lousy one shot but a good opener for a story. Needs to be edited though.
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG WOW meow plaese update that was WOW more plaese really want to read more thanks Ja Na
person Llen9495
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! This story was hilarious! Please, get a Beta to help you.
person 4inukag4
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay... really short and really intense. But good for a start... you may want to get a beta to help with grammar and spelling... I would be glad to help, simply email me at the address in my profile. So far it seems so good.

Patiently awaiting an update,

Holly S
"I must leave for there they go and I am their leader."
person Qiana
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it, it's dark please let me know when you update
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well it seems like its going be a good story

please update soon

take care
person DAZ306
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmaoooooooo