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for Dark Comfort

by northstar

schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My God...you win at life. I don't know why I haven't left you a review before, but I'm remedying that now! The story is poignant, flows well, is IC, and is ohhh so deliciously Naraku. The lovely descriptions of the tentacle sex are grand, dear. I really thank you for writing this. It is possibly THE hottest and most well written tentacle scene I've read. Now off to read that Nar/Kags you just wrote.

Hope you're having a good after Christmas. Heh.

<3 / Ryoko
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This only has one review? How is this possible???

Guh, even better the second time around. These two need more love, because they are so wrongfully hot together. Squicky wonderful job.
person Qiana
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hot can you write another Kohaku/Naraku maybe modern