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for The Races

by Chaosmage77

schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh, someone may already have pointed this out, but Notre Dame is in Indiana not Ohio (see movie "Rudy"). Understandable error, both states are flat - as in FLAT! I was raise in Oregon, in the mountains, so I know FLAT. Now ask me how the Chicago Bears came to the Superbowl with only 1/2 their game. What were they thinking???? Oops! Off topic.
person cocoke5
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow good chapter and love it . can not wait for the next chapter of story and see if kagome win the races and what her stepfather is going to do . nd i lvoe the race. too. good luck and up date soon.
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good
update soon
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was a good story hurry up and update it please..
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love it....
Love it!!!
Now Sesshomaru has a reason to be protective of her now!
person cocoke5
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow kagome is go to be super when she found out that her self father did . and ican not wait for more ofthe story and see what happen . and sess is go to have some fun. good luck onthe story. and i will be wait for more. up date soon.
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmmmmm let me guess seshoumaru and kagome are betrothed yay thats so funny! and your right he does need to let some air out of that hot head of his.tehehehe please update soon @--@
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved how she told her step-father off!
I love this story I hope to see more of it!
Good job!
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
plzz write more soon
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
write more