AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for The Races

by Chaosmage77

person DAZ306
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
every story i read make Sess dick 12 inches and thick..........:)
person cocoke5
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love love that i have to say love the story and the way you have them.. i cannot wait for the next chpter and see what happen up date sooon soooooooooooooooooooon .
person cocoke5
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that chapter was good and i love it and can not wait for the next chapter of the story and see what they found out about kegamo step father. up date soon.
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww...man thats messed up
sesshomaru should have killed him right there
owell
loved it anyways
update soon
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was sad. yeah, i can see doing that to rapist murderers... and child molesters... there are some things that just need killing. slow the writing down though, i think you're trying to everything down too fast. i'm still loving it and i really like how Sesshoumaru isn't a total arrogant bastard.

schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah, i sit corrected! my apologies. enjoy flat ohio. by the way, i root for MSU and UofM, in that order. OSU is Oregon State University;in our house there is no other.
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you're a good storyteller, i'm really enjoying this story. i've also enjoyed teasing you. will we have another chapter soon? i really want to know what's going to happen.
person cocoke5
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can wait for the next chapter ofthe story it is getting real good. up date soon.
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was very good

update soon
person cocoke5
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow very good chapter and ican not wait for the next chapte of the story and see if kagome step father do. be waitin,